Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Dec 27, 2008 3:25 AM #323035
hey guys i haven't animated in week so here's a new one
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Dec 27, 2008 9:46 AM #323110
good animation but i think its too fast, you also need to whatch gravity tutorial the stick falls back on the ramp too fast.
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Dec 27, 2008 10:09 AM #323120
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hey guys i haven't animated in week so here's a new one
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not bad for a week not animating(i think it's really good)
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Dec 27, 2008 11:24 AM #323149
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alright, C&C&C&C&C!!!!! PLZ!
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or at least say if im low or med beginner...
it gets choppy near the end...

not bad, just some things were weird to me
just as rab said(long time ago), try to don't use sprites
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my new anim! trying some blurs, but it looks too shitty to me:
Imagerate pls
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Dec 27, 2008 1:53 PM #323181
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not bad, just some things were weird to me
just as rab said(long time ago), try to don't use sprites
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my new anim! trying some blurs, but it looks too shitty to me:
Imagerate pls



where do you see sprites there?
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Dec 27, 2008 2:13 PM #323186
Quote from menma
not bad, just some things were weird to me
just as rab said(long time ago), try to don't use sprites
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my new anim! trying some blurs, but it looks too shitty to me:
Imagerate pls


some part of it are choppy and uneased, and the run is weird, read the tut again, rate: med beginner?

and vladikus10, I think the part when the ball explodes looks like sprite
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Dec 27, 2008 6:02 PM #323244
Well its still doesnt look like a sprite, its just 2 stk. with diferent colors
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Dec 27, 2008 7:31 PM #323297
well finally got 20 postand heres my short try after a year of not animating

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buti still dont understand why its choppy when he dodges
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Dec 27, 2008 9:19 PM #323322
just something i made in like 10-20 mins Image
i can't seem to find out why i don't like the run >:(
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Dec 28, 2008 5:16 AM #323458
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just something i made in like 10-20 mins Image
i can't seem to find out why i don't like the run >:(


probably because he doesn'tmove fast nough considering how his arms move he needs to be moving very fast or fix the arms to be slower that way it looks natural....
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Dec 28, 2008 7:17 AM #323511
the run was kinda "unrealistic"foot placement was ok, but the whole ani was shaky


my animation
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i am not a beginner
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Dec 28, 2008 7:34 AM #323525
So true, looks good, don't be posting here again. Some of it is a tiny bit choppy, the movements were quite good.I say work a b it more on stiffness, and try camera angles. U should do a joint with Jonny, u & him are around the same level. =D
Keep it up!
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Dec 28, 2008 10:50 AM #323630
new animation, c&c please


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Dec 28, 2008 10:51 AM #323631
thanks btw
Stick making sucks i had spend 2.5 hours on a bow and then.....****ING FLOATING POINT ERROR!
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Dec 28, 2008 10:53 AM #323633
c&c please