Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Apr 15, 2009 4:25 AM #396611
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Not really up to my standards, just a rushed 10 minute animation.
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Apr 15, 2009 4:59 AM #396621
why posting in beginners? you're good.
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Apr 15, 2009 6:59 AM #396651
mavz and mega are indeed good enough to get out of the beginner's section, seeing as they know how to apply basic stuff into their animations
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Apr 15, 2009 8:44 AM #396668
Its always good to start in here though, no matter how good you think you are. Though you's two are good enough to get out of here.
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Apr 15, 2009 9:20 AM #396675
mega finally outa beginners O.O
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Apr 15, 2009 2:36 PM #396746
*Applauds*

Now go and frolick in the fields of spp!
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Apr 15, 2009 10:45 PM #396992
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Apr 16, 2009 12:19 AM #397037
You know basic stuff, and you apply it somewhat well. The only "bad" animation that wasn't up to par with the others was the last one.

Work on your easing a little bit more and work on your reactions and such. Do a little more with basic movements. Try to add a ground in your animations too.

I think you're good enough to leave the beginner's section, seeing as you have general knowledge of what to do and how to apply it.
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Apr 16, 2009 1:17 AM #397078
i dunno... it could use some smoothness. the easing is great but the fluidity...
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Apr 16, 2009 1:54 AM #397138
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My second animation... not that great, but its alright....
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Apr 16, 2009 7:11 AM #397312
Quote from Waterboy
No, im serious. Make an animation with some pretty good fighting, easing and almost no stiffness. Youll definitely be High Beginner.


... i hate criticism his animation is sooooo awsome he doesnt need fixing !!
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Apr 16, 2009 7:31 AM #397316
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My second animation... not that great, but its alright....
way too choppy. the effects weren't all that great either. At least the guy reacted though. When you're going to jump, make sure his legs bend to give power. And wen the other guy (without the powers) walks in, walking doesn't slide that much..
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Apr 16, 2009 8:31 AM #397328
Quote from l300l30
... i hate criticism his animation is sooooo awsome he doesnt need fixing !!


Shit animations(isnt aimed at anyone here) may roll on youtube , it doesnt work this way here. Get it? everyone needs improvement, hes not even Intermediate yet.
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Apr 16, 2009 8:45 AM #397335
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Just did something to make sure if I am not rusty.
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Apr 16, 2009 8:48 AM #397337
Looks ok but it's so short that it's hard to tell. Maybe needs some bend in the knees as it lands.