please say something relevant. you have 20 posts so you can post an anim now, please do so, or criticise other peoples. CRITICISE, dont just say there "kool"

any CC's on this blood test?

Hey guys, I've been warming up to Pivot again... here's a run loop test, please C&C thanks.







(EDIT): Sorry Pheonix, the only blood I noticed was the blood splatter on the ground, I could barely make out the blood that comes from his head. From what I could see, it's good, I just think you need to show a bit more blood, or just make it a bit more easy to notice.

@Phoenixslayer: I think the blood should have lasted a few more frames with the neck kick. You didn't make the other one yourself did you? If you did it was good, but methinks sprite.

You want me to cc the movements?

@Arkehy: It's quite smooth and fairly well looped. I think the timing was off with the tremor though. Also, I would extend the legs a bit more each stride.

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@Phoenixslayer: I think the blood should have lasted a few more frames with the neck kick. You didn't make the other one yourself did you? If you did it was good, but methinks sprite.

You want me to cc the movements?

@Arkehy: It's quite smooth and fairly well looped. I think the timing was off with the tremor though. Also, I would extend the legs a bit more each stride.

it wasnt a sprite, i hate sprites >_>, it was very easy to make just make a blotch with alot of lines sticking out and circles on outside and your done and how was the movements?

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eh, more blood in the air would be nice. and the ground blood should be a slowly expanding pool.

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hmmm, does he have a stomach ache? bend over less. It's a quirky style but if you make him bend over less, I think it'll be fine

The movements were stiff. Especially the guy who got picked up - he looked like a statue. I think you should try spacing your impacts more heavily too.

I too noticed stiffness in the legs of the attacker. I found it comical

EDIT: OMG! the sticks have no back joints! YOU FOOL!!!!!

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I too noticed stiffness in the legs of the attacker. I found it comical

EDIT: OMG! the sticks have no back joints! YOU FOOL!!!!!

its bad for no back joint? its just my kinda stick :3

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its bad for no back joint? its just my kinda stick :3

you will be called for stiffness every time with no back joint. you try doing anything with a straight back.

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learn easing


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lol... NEVER DOUBLE POST!!!! it's bad for your skin. use the edit button.

EDIT EDIT: now let's see you do a walk/run.

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thats very stiff, uneased, choppy, the sniper only moved his head, the guy who shot the sniper barely had any force back

Water, you need to work on the basics of stiffness, choppiness and easing. You also need better blood. Decent sticks will help too.

Hey, from the C&C I got, I tried my best to work it in the loop test...



Sorry, when I uploaded it, it slowed it down a ton... Please C&C


EDIT: Tobbe, you can't change it to a GIF file? The way you upload your pivot is save it as a GIF and change the frame delay to 6 and resize thingy to 1/2 and uncheck merge. But if you can't change the file type, I guess something's wrong.