Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Aug 20, 2009 3:00 PM #476663
Yay for multi quote


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Oh so I'm assuming people from Holland are faggots. But seriously? You think hes going to use a translate his posting on the internet. Your fucking stupid. Runescape fag.


I'm assuming you just can't accept the fact you can't read normally and that I infact am right about him being a total shit?

Lemme explain: HE ALREADY USED TRANSLATE! So why the fuck is his english still bad? Because he's a fucking moron.

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Jesus ****ing christ calm down both of you, he spoke somewhat ok english, but he was using it in a retarded manner, he also was making fun of members of the forum, besides if your gonna fight do it in debate forums so there's no spam here

[ontopic] anyone got any animations?
Also I got to sleep sorry zed, I'll cc it tomorrow


No he didn't speak english normal.

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Somewhere. Hang on a sec.



I don't remember it. Show me again. Also, the secret of saying fuck is only known to ancient masters of the forum or people who quote their messages.

Edit: Here's that walk re-refined. You can crit that if you want.

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...fuck you.... Oh lol I just saw how you do it :P
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Aug 20, 2009 3:06 PM #476667
Rival Rate my walk please? at the post with the run, the last one
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Aug 20, 2009 3:22 PM #476674
i like your walk it has a nice loop and the arms are cool i give it a 9.25/10.00
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Aug 20, 2009 3:25 PM #476676
Heheee! Thanks King... But... Zed told me something embarrasing 'bout you! heheeee!!
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Aug 20, 2009 3:26 PM #476677
?????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????????????????? PM ME NOW please -.-
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Aug 20, 2009 3:27 PM #476678
More of a compliment towards Velo actually.
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Aug 20, 2009 3:29 PM #476682
-.-+ .velo pm me
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Aug 20, 2009 3:34 PM #476683
Well i pmed him... ZED!!!!!!!!! Look at my walk! the back stride is perfect!!
And your requested run... which is crap lol.
Edit: Still waiting for Rival's Rating on my walk and pointers on running if he isn't lazy today
Edit2: You havn't completed your challenge Zed....
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Aug 20, 2009 4:05 PM #476699
Since you wanted me to crit this:

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Very well, I can see ALOT of improvement.

The only real problem I'm having is his back: It's stiff. Try to make his back bend a little to the right, and the back to normal. Not too much though.Also look at the head: it's a bit choppy. Though not really a problem :)

I think the leg on the right is a Bit stiff, but thats in my opinion.

Great work! keep it up!
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Aug 20, 2009 4:12 PM #476704
Is this better or worse? I fixed the stiff back but, the head and leg seem fine to me...
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Aug 20, 2009 4:16 PM #476705
It's worse actually. Look close at zeds perfect walk. It goes up and down very smoothly, without breaking the loop. The back was good, but not good.

You need to make it go right(thats what you did) but then also make it go back. It's a VERY small movement.
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Aug 20, 2009 4:21 PM #476707
You need to move every joint in the frame - Just keep up the good work
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Aug 20, 2009 4:22 PM #476709
i wanna try my walk again
my first walk
http://www.truploader.com/view/519320
im going to go fix the arms
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Aug 20, 2009 4:22 PM #476710
How 'bout now?
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After:
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I think this is better with the head:
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Aug 20, 2009 4:40 PM #476715
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CnC ;D