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Aug 28, 2009 8:48 PM #480029
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Imagei tried to fix the sliding leg.does it look better now?


just reposted it so others could rate it
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Aug 28, 2009 8:53 PM #480032
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just reposted it so others could rate it


I like it almost entirely. The only thing that I think you could change is that the height remains constant throughout the twist in the air wheras with physics he should start jumping upwards and then begin to lose height halfway through. The force and momentum is great, keep it up.
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Aug 29, 2009 1:33 AM #480160
New animation I made last night. Practice for me v zed and joint.

Inter quality?

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Aug 29, 2009 2:29 AM #480182
I'm back! This is my latest ones.

EDIT: Gonna have to use Tinypic instead.
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I actually made those in less than a Hour.
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Aug 29, 2009 4:26 AM #480202
Imagecheck out my flip
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Aug 29, 2009 7:40 AM #480242
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Oh and Zed,get over here and C n C this
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Aug 29, 2009 8:00 AM #480246
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New animation I made last night. Practice for me v zed and joint.

Inter quality?

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Inter quality indeed. Now all you need is flow.
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Aug 29, 2009 8:23 AM #480247
And the flow i shall recieve!
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Aug 29, 2009 9:21 AM #480255
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just reposted it so others could rate it

The aerial double kick (or whatever it is) is weirdo. In the last part the arms should move. Otherwise it's fine.
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Aug 29, 2009 10:17 AM #480273
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I'm back! This is my latest ones.

EDIT: Gonna have to use Tinypic instead.
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I actually made those in less than a Hour.


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Both of you need to read this all the way through. Sorry, but every point applies apart from the saving and uploading for animationmaster3000. http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?p=1582816#post1582816

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New animation I made last night. Practice for me v zed and joint.

Inter quality?

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It's nice. I'd say a little more follow through on that last kick.

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Fantastic. I sorta feel the arm that's folded in on itself needs to do something towards the end but I can't think of it. It's a well choreographed combo and each movement is clearly defined but still follows on well from the movement before it. For a more complete animation you'd need to deal with the stiffness in the base stick and making a proper punch, but I really liked what the black stick was doing.
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Aug 29, 2009 10:26 AM #480278
This will be my first time actually trying so please don't mob me but do comment on it. Image
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Aug 29, 2009 10:39 AM #480283
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This will be my first time actually trying so please don't mob me but do comment on it. Image


The running was good for someone who's never had criticism before.

You're making your own effects, which will take some practice, but is better than using other people's imo and I have great respect for that. I've only tried it once myself.

You need to learn some of the basics like easing and stiffness which will help slow down the guy on the right who looked a tad spastic, and you need some more experience with effects, but it's not bad at all. I'd recomend trying some small simple stuff where we can work on those basics and then coming back to the big stuff and effects.
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Aug 29, 2009 10:42 AM #480285
1st :Smile: 2nd :Nooooooo: 3rd :Cold: lol thanks for that
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Aug 29, 2009 11:12 AM #480290
wthell ar u talkin about
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Aug 29, 2009 11:14 AM #480291
Yes I do I was just being random + I wanted to use the emoticons in a post
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