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LeoZXC
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Dec 31, 2009 9:19 AM #531002
the combo is good, but the effect where it flashes against the whole body just looks a bit weird :/
i think its because it goes over the body. no thats a bad way to describe it...
i mean like, the effect would be good, if the flash was ONLY on the body, and it didn't, like, go PAST the body. you get what I mean?
but otherwise pretty good :D
ill be making a one-on-one soon i hope, but probably not for the next couple of days :/

btw can you guys give me more c&c on my anim?
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no its not finished.

and something is REALLY WRONG IN THE BOTTOM LEFT HAND CORNER!
but i cant explain what the heck it is.
if you want I can send the .piv file so someone can study it and edit it, but PLEASE someone help me figure out what the heck is wrong in that $%^*%*$^%# CORNER!
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Dec 31, 2009 9:50 AM #531020
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Please where can I get sticks from apart from droidz and dark demon and how do you use darkdemon to get sticks? What is cc?
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Dec 31, 2009 10:21 AM #531026
Quote from tosyno
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Please where can I get sticks from apart from droidz and dark demon and how do you use darkdemon to get sticks? What is cc?


first, I cant see the images. that means they have been removed or the file has been corrupted.
wait a friggin sec, are you using photobucket or imageshack? ok your using imageshack, lets take your link and see what I get...
but i still cant see it here
404 Not Found. The links are WRONG :)

second, don't try to get sticks from droidz or DD. MAKE EM
if you really cant, then go to droidz and ask in a shop, though only Wasabi Peanuts one is not closed and its not very active :/

c&c => comments and criticism
and guys can I get some? Please?!
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Dec 31, 2009 11:08 AM #531039
In my opinion. the combo was sex cakes...

Btw Leo, I could've sworn CC stands for "Constructive Criticism"....
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Dec 31, 2009 11:58 AM #531045
The two are used interchangably.

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Before I said im not so good with jumps, So I decided to do a test.
It kind of looks like a flying knee of some sort but whatever
Even though im pretty satisfied with it, I still want CC.
Here it is :
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Lol he barely jumps...


I really enjoy watching that. The physics are off in that he should move further forwards at a constant speed, and the legs should have straightened more after take off, but the landing was sublime. Bit of shakiness on the head on the way back up.

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Happy New Years :D

New Years Is Tommorow For Me :3

I havnt posted a combo in so long... but It's a test for some more effect's ill be postin

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He was off balance after the first hit. Your followthrough's improving but you either need to get the next movement to flow off the previous one better or to add more anticipation and easing at the start of the movements. The effects were nice. You're getting better pretty quickly.
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Dec 31, 2009 1:01 PM #531066
Quote from Teriyakid
In my opinion. the combo was sex cakes...

Btw Leo, I could've sworn CC stands for "Constructive Criticism"....


lol, my bad o.O
tyz dude, but any criticism? :/
and heres my VERY first anim, i made everything, and i had never seen youtube, or spp, anything. I did this on. my. own. except the realistic guy and this other guy.
and it sucks azz...
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it sucks. really bad. but i was like, below beginner :P
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Dec 31, 2009 4:47 PM #531094
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Some Type Of Explosion Practice
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Dec 31, 2009 4:54 PM #531098
uh, dude, the guy gets hit, then theres an explosion and hes on the floor several feet away.
so thought needed in how to use explosions I think. like, have them in the air, have one kick the other into the ground, have the explosion then it would look good.
but the explosion is pretty good.
but you need more reason for the guy to be on the floor. first, he (i think) should be face down when he hits the door, and instead of something coming out of his neck when hit, maybe do slow-mo hitting, then everything returns to normal speed and he slams into the floor. but this is all optional, its your anim :P

HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS FROM 2010 HERE!!! :))))
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Dec 31, 2009 8:06 PM #531163
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Please where can I get sticks from apart from droidz and dark demon and how do you use darkdemon to get sticks? What is cc?


There....before you make full length fights try the basics....walking....running..ball anim.....you know?and work on your easy that anim was extremly choppy.
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Dec 31, 2009 8:44 PM #531168
Whoa This Came Out Better Than I Thought :D

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This is my first time with a gun as you can see

the first two shot's were test. But then I thought I can kick it up a notch so I added someone else

My friend bet me that I couldnt make something kick azz within 3 hours and I told him it was way to long for me.

The end was kinda rushed since he told me I had 2 minutes left so

C&C please :D

I also Edited This Version In Flash CS2 it took me 30 minutes but I think it looks hot
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Dec 31, 2009 10:53 PM #531207
holy crap the second one looks good! o.O
I LOVE the blurring, but theres a slight bit when he gets behind the second guy and the second guy kinda disappears without much of a walk in. like the 2 situations don't connect. Btw, how do you do the full body dash? did you just use the one you gave me and made 3 smaller ones, or did you design a completely new one only for this project? o.O
happy new year guys!

also my long anim with more edits.
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cc please!
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Dec 31, 2009 11:41 PM #531230
Thanks :D

Leo you dont have to walk if your moving at the speed of sound >_>

Like I said befoure I edited it in Flash CS2

Im lovin the blurs a little to much :P

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I wanted it to kinda look like shock....but ill just have to keep expirement

Leo I think that you should start it over or edit every thing so that it looks eased
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Jan 1, 2010 12:56 AM #531275
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wow! you posted a run loop!

Okay, the first thing to do if you want to get better is get yourself a stick that has a back joint. try to go for a pretty basic stick. Next, move every joint in every frame. Easing is also high on the list of priorities. you need to learn at least the essentials of it.

If you follow the advice, you will be able to animate like the best of them. Just remember, spend time on animations and learn to use the EDIT button... pwetty pweeze???


i wish a saw this earlier of course it was supposed to be a galoop so i still am bad but atleast i can somwhat animate
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Jan 1, 2010 1:10 AM #531281
now i know there will be alot of the word "noob" in my replies and idc but what does it mean to be ninja'd?
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Jan 1, 2010 1:37 AM #531294
the anim is what the name implies

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