The jump is superb, you could easily make him land in the exact spot he landed.
But add something to that, I think you're doing great. Sadly that's all I have to say the jump is pretty much perfect, the only problem is it's only a jump and not a jump into a kick or another jump, or a backflip.
The only thing to fix is his back arm coming out to fast.
Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.
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Apr 2, 2010 8:06 AM #562526
Apr 2, 2010 8:21 AM #562529
Quote from JutsuThe jump is superb, you could easily make him land in the exact spot he landed.
But add something to that, I think you're doing great. Sadly that's all I have to say the jump is pretty much perfect, the only problem is it's only a jump and not a jump into a kick or another jump, or a backflip.
The only thing to fix is his back arm coming out to fast.
I can't do that kind of stuff yet D:
But I completely understand where your coming from, don't make it so plane, add some UHN TISS into it like a flip or something so there's more to look at and criticize off of + it'll look like a decent animation. I appreciate your CC though.
Apr 2, 2010 10:12 AM #562562
I think you need to do something about those arms. They should go straight up and then slow down, rather than going halfway, slowing, speeding up again, etc.
Apr 2, 2010 11:25 AM #562573
So I need to make it flow? OK I think I can do that. thanx.Quote from JutsuYou wouldn't be caught dead with my signature stick, because I don't have one. I can tell already that it's going to be within it's limitations of no background black line animation quality, you want to put more effort into it to start with instead of trying to make it better. If you're lazy now, I can only imagine later down the road.
That said, I'm not disappointing with the current outcome, it's actually alright. You need to make everything fit together better instead of what looks like constant stop and go, but what was going is pretty good, keep it up.
Quote from TeriyakidA jump test I just did CC Please :D
I assumed it would have looked better if I made him land at the same exact spot he jumped from, but I didn't have the patience for that.
Nice
EDIT: I added more onto the animation but I'm stuck. I don't know what to do next :(
Originaly the afro guy was meant to be running but that....failed.
Apr 2, 2010 11:47 AM #562577
Apr 2, 2010 12:02 PM #562584
Quote from Kieran.
:( Yes, you did indeed fail. Buuuuut who cares i iz gonna do mah duty an CC this thing.
OK first of all, I think your allready fermilier with the basics right? Then apply them goddamnit, it's all you need to do.
Apr 2, 2010 12:46 PM #562594
Ok now real CC?
Apr 2, 2010 1:03 PM #562599
There was a bit of shakiness in the leg and it stopped suddenly. That applies to the front one after each big punch. You needed to follow that leg movement through. Then you needed to move the back a bit. Considering it was your first it wasn't really bad.
Apr 2, 2010 9:24 PM #562796
Run loop is not good. Or its not a loop at all. XD 
Apr 3, 2010 2:08 AM #562896
Took Jutsu's word, and instead of making him jump in place, HE JUMPS ON A WALL! :D
CC Please :
I do realize while he is power walking \ running, his movements go up instead of walking straight...
I had nothing to level the floor, cause once again, I had to do a system recovery and lost the floor level I had and was to lazy to make another one.
CC Please :
I do realize while he is power walking \ running, his movements go up instead of walking straight...
I had nothing to level the floor, cause once again, I had to do a system recovery and lost the floor level I had and was to lazy to make another one.
Apr 3, 2010 7:44 AM #562998
Quote from CinnamonbunRun loop is not good. Or its not a loop at all. XD
Well, it needs flow. Theres not realy very much to say about that but then again it's early and I'm still tired so I'll look at it again later.
The animation was fine, bit of shakyness to work on and there needs to bet quite a lot more antcipation before the jump.Quote from TeriyakidTook Jutsu's word, and instead of making him jump in place, HE JUMPS ON A WALL! :D
CC Please :
I do realize while he is power walking \ running, his movements go up instead of walking straight...
I had nothing to level the floor, cause once again, I had to do a system recovery and lost the floor level I had and was to lazy to make another one.
btw I finished that fighting animation that has turned to crap......
FEAR THE MIGHT OF MY SHAKY CAMARA EFFECT!! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!Apr 4, 2010 3:23 PM #563734
Rofl
Did I get tackeld?
how come Zed got an Epic kick in the face with the lazer beam AND I GET MOFO TACKELD!?
Screw it....
Ill Joint this with you. It seams fun
Did I get tackeld?
how come Zed got an Epic kick in the face with the lazer beam AND I GET MOFO TACKELD!?
Screw it....
Ill Joint this with you. It seams fun
Apr 4, 2010 3:27 PM #563738
So should I pm you with this animation?Quote from Moch12Rofl
Did I get tackeld?
how come Zed got an Epic kick in the face with the lazer beam AND I GET MOFO TACKELD!?
Screw it....
Ill Joint this with you. It seams fun
Apr 4, 2010 9:30 PM #563902
Debating whether I should make some pivots for a while?
Apr 5, 2010 3:01 AM #564021
What can I do to make this animation faster?:confused:
