Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Jan 13, 2013 2:33 AM #849498
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any recommendations on how to make this better
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Jan 13, 2013 10:52 AM #849929
He's leaning quite far forward, and maybe you could loosen the elbows up a little. It's pretty good though.
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Jan 13, 2013 12:56 PM #849990
unrust. havnt done much... lol

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Jan 14, 2013 7:57 PM #851293
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It could use a bit more anticipation and followthrough. A somersault is a pretty big movement to come out of nowhere.


Duly noted (and do forgive the slightly, eh, arrogant(?) tone of my earlier post. ^^;)
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Jan 18, 2013 3:25 AM #854154
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Duly noted (and do forgive the slightly, eh, arrogant(?) tone of my earlier post. ^^;)


Definately loosen the arms up a bit. Try to imagine the way your lower arm moves in a slightly delayed motion compared to your upper arm. For example when you start moving the upper arm back, maybe keep the lower arm moving forward for a frame or two before making it move back with the rest of the arm. I don't think he is leaning forward too far. It's just that his back is stiff and you haven't really implemented a feeling of gravity as he takes a stride.
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Jan 23, 2013 8:15 PM #859999
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This is an easing test


Anybody got any suggestions to make it better or is it fine
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Jan 23, 2013 8:21 PM #860010
but pivot is no good flash 8 is awesome !!!!!! :]
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Jan 25, 2013 4:51 AM #861575
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but pivot is no good flash 8 is awesome !!!!!! :]


If you don't like Pivot, leave the section. The program is only as good as the person using it. Not to mention Pivot does actually allow you to animate sticks with a far higher level of detail.

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This is an easing test


Anybody got any suggestions to make it better or is it fine


There's nothing wrong with the easing. The first suggestion I would make is increase the frame rate. If you load pivot there should be a frame rate slider, change it to about 24fps. There's no right/wrong way to easing. It depends on style and the scenario.
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Jan 26, 2013 1:48 AM #862593
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If you don't like Pivot, leave the section. The program is only as good as the person using it. Not to mention Pivot does actually allow you to animate sticks with a far higher level of detail.



There's nothing wrong with the easing. The first suggestion I would make is increase the frame rate. If you load pivot there should be a frame rate slider, change it to about 24fps. There's no right/wrong way to easing. It depends on style and the scenario.


Thanks for the advice :) and I was asking about this easing test to make sure everything is where it needs to be cause when I have enough experience with it I'm going to darkdemon
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Jan 27, 2013 7:28 PM #864512
Also can I have some suggestions o this I changed the frame rate to 24 on this Image please excuse the double post
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Jan 28, 2013 2:11 AM #864850
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Also can I have some suggestions o this I changed the frame rate to 24 on this Image please excuse the double post


take a look at the front leg. it seems too far outward. the arms look good except they spread too far outward and are jelly-ish

sorry for rushed CnC. try looking at yourself when u walk and animate it thru that perspective, it helps!
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Feb 18, 2013 11:06 PM #888420
this is all i can make but i have more



http://www.fileize.com/files/b712d731/cd9/fight.piv
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Feb 23, 2013 6:53 AM #893301
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I need to post more
I think I dont stay here too often since no sensible person really sees pivot as interesting :c
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Feb 23, 2013 7:49 AM #893361
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I need to post more
I think I dont stay here too often since no sensible person really sees pivot as interesting :c


great anims! The movements were very fluid, and the attacks had good force.
on the second one... i dunno, the fall seems a bit wierd.

anyway love them!

btw i just joined DD, my username is grudge and i am almost interz.

what rank are you?
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Feb 23, 2013 8:13 AM #893374
I've been intermediate for around two years I believe.