im not an profesional but i think that you could use alittle smother moves;)




PS: I made a new one can some one rate this one hehe:D

Really Choppy And Bad Physics This Is My One I Conjured Up In 15 Minutes
http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/3209/snipershotze3.gif

Me and elbow ore ust me ore ust him?:confused:

sry that i ask about this silly thing but i ust nead to know lol....

I really doubt that any of you have seen my animations =|
I can own all of you in 15 frames. lol.

cryztal- I know you mean for the punch to bring pain unto him, but you need effects to conjur a punch thatwill bring him off of his feet. so dopn't work on that now. But if you want to do a strong punch, You could make the attacker have a quick jolt (from top point of the arm, 2 frames, then impact). And make the victim take one step back while he recouperates. If you didn't understand that. I'll make you an example sometime today. And you ease at the beginning of every movement, and the end of every movement. Until you reach High beginner, then it gets more complicated.

Elbows- stfu noob. You didn't mastert walking or running. Look at that and tell me. Is that how you walk or run? If so, you need help. When looking at a tutorial with frame by frame examples, try to copy the movements exactly. and don't rush it. The most important part is. If you're taking a step forward, your front foot ALWAYS stays in the same spot on the onion skin, It's easier to understand if you have a figure type with feet.

Shadow man- Work on easing and proper movements. Read some tutorials and practice. You people are lucky im posting here because Im extremely busy, so it aint gonna happen much. You definantly need top work on what I told Elbows about with the foot placement.

mack2k7- it was alright, but a city scape is how should I put this.... it's made for a backround. People enlarge them when they want to animate a stk. figure in a city. But they're perpose is for backrounds, and it sucks to watch a 4 centimeter tall stk. man getting shot by a slow ass bullet and falling 2 inches. It's not worth the pain and suffering.

the perfect list of things to do for real beginners:
1) work on choppiness
2) easing
3) walking
4) running
5) fighting
and he most important one of all... don't be discouraged by people flaming you when you are just a beginner

this is how proper runing looks

1- that isn't proper running
2- give creds for it
3- you get flamed because of what Eclipse said (stormwalkers signiture)
4- you also get flamed for being a noob

you just have to learn to divide yourself from other people, get your own attitude and personality, and don't act like a noob, and people will like you more.
Don't make threads every animation you make, and post here, and people will like you more. But someone will always hate you

what are you talking about 1st what dont you liek about the run and i havent made a thread with an animation for like a month now .. you starting to be a fag not how u used to be!

oh btw eclipse didnt say it about me

Dragora There is a lot of people calling you a fag maybe you should stop rating peoples animations in the Beginner's Section and let Crystal do it. You can critict the threads with animations in them.

Lol im very new but.... i have a broken back,neck one XD its at the end

my very 3rd so im not sure if its good BTW i havent posted this anywhere

work on the basics.

Storm walker- im aware of both. I havnt flammed you yet.
Krock- You're being a gay little noob. Im almost Intermediate, he's low beginner. If he says one of your animations is med beginner, you'll be posting threads saying, "Im a med beginner" and shit, people will get pissed at you and order will be hurt more than it already is in the pivot section. If you cannot take constructive criticism, gtfo the forums because you're never going to fit here. But if you can take C&C, then you'll be fine.

Quote from Flair

WOAA WOAA WOAA STOP YOUR NEWBY LITTLE SELF THERE KINTO I've probly had more action in an hour then you will ever have in you life. And Dragora that is no excuse and no you dont have more "respect" than me.

EDIT: TBS is Dragora???????????

Action with your computer keyboard you mean?

Dragora what exactly you mean by aware of both?

Hey i'm not mad at you Dragura for criticing me I mean how mean your are being to other people stupid can't you read what I write.

if you're offended by what I say, be offended, i dont give a damn.
Im not flamming or being mean, it's C&C, you havn't seen how much of a prick I can be