Here is my 3rd attempt of a jump, plz comment... O.O

Sorry for double posting

i like the beginning but what the heck is wrong with him in the air ............. like what kind of jump is he doing and when the guy is in the air his backbone stays the same for like 5 or 7 frames pretty stiff ohh and so i heard that stagnantflame is mentoring you (hes mentoring me too) so its good that we help each other out

I was just trying to make him look like an idiot lol...the backbone was stiff, yeah, lazy me

but is stagnantflame mentoring you?

Yep sure he is...we better stop spamming here, talk to me in pm

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I was just trying to make him look like an idiot lol...the backbone was stiff, yeah, lazy me

poorly animated, and the whole thing is stiff

First real beam effect. Improvements?

nope. The beam woulda had to make somethin explode fer the guy to go that far back. you need work

Thanks. And yes, I know, I do need work.



Is this as bad, or any better? I know the physics are a bit off, I was just experimenting. Does the slide look right?

seriously stiff at the end and the legs wobble to. I'd say med beginner though. Just work on some stuff.
(ur not med beginner, the animation was)

What's my actual rank? Is it different from the rank of the animation?

I'd say ur Low Beginner

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poorly animated, and the whole thing is stiff

Ur so cruel!!
lol jk
thanks for the comment

What do I need to improve on? And what am I doing wrong?

some movements, add a bit more easing, dont use effects, and physics