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Beginners, post your Pivot animations here.

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Jul 7, 2007 7:58 AM #43438
eh, i dont care right now. i was bored so i did it. i dont get it, people keep saying start with the basics. but where the hell do i find some tuts.
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Jul 7, 2007 8:24 AM #43441
There is a tutorial section here in SPP...
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Jul 7, 2007 8:27 AM #43442
ok. thanks for telling me a little late there.
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Jul 7, 2007 9:00 AM #43448
Hi, I posted this on an own thread but realized I should post it here instead, otherwise everyone gets crazy ^^

These are my fourth and fifth animations yet.

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Please say what I should work on :)
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Jul 7, 2007 9:40 AM #43454
lol they're both pretty good, and i can see that you have some of the basics down really well, the gun one, idk i might have to see more, but the blood effect was nice; and on the ball one, it was smooth, and kinda detailed, but the only flaw i saw was that right arm, i lol'd very hard after he came up, but otherwise good job
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Jul 7, 2007 9:53 AM #43456
Good for a beginner, but the bloody was poorly animated. Though it's okay-ish. Now when he shoots the gun it should RECOIL, I hope you know what that means.
The second animation...The stickman is very shakey.
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Jul 7, 2007 10:18 AM #43460
ooh thanks *happy* I know what u mean with recoil and that flaw with the arm... and yeah he's shaking a bit but I'll do my best with the next one. *another shootie WITH recoil^^*
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Jul 7, 2007 10:57 AM #43462
Okay so here it is, it didn't take so long cuz I started it yesterday.
What do you think? I know he doesn't move his legs at all.. maybe should fix that.. Whatever.

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So? What to work on?
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Jul 7, 2007 11:20 AM #43465
This one was okay-ish, work on physics. And a bit more easing.
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Jul 7, 2007 11:31 AM #43469
okay thanks. I think I'll have to practice more on easing and physics than.. Just started on my frist sword fight.. dont seem to be that good for now ^^
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Jul 7, 2007 1:22 PM #43492
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XD My first!
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Jul 7, 2007 1:26 PM #43494
think aobut it are you really gonna hold a pistol of that size?
even if you did the recoil would be humongous and there is no recoil
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Jul 7, 2007 1:39 PM #43496
Errr I'm getting really pee'd off..

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It's my 2nd proper animation but .. ugh.. It looks shit :(
When he is standing still after throwing the other guy to the floor .. he looks like a fricking spaz lmao.. I didnt no how to move him.. because I was told ot always move the orange dot and every part of the body every frame.. so I was like wtf -.- ?

Any help is REALLY appreciated..
Also heres my msn for any1 who is willing to be someone who I may ask questions upon I dont expect people to willingly do that but meh worth a try.

Luke~
sorry if it's so bad its a waste of time I didnt no where else to put it..
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Jul 7, 2007 1:48 PM #43497
well the guy looks like a spaz
you could show him walking towards the other guy
or just like keep him pretty much still
or getting redy to punch
theres alot of things you could do
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Jul 7, 2007 2:33 PM #43514
Luke try to do a ground line so you know where your sticks are. And slow down.
You dont need to move all parts of the body when day are standing still. It just looks crazy as you realized...
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