Yeah, that's why you're a beginner. There's tons of differences, actually. =/

1. Floor.

2. Legs spread better.

3. Jump is better, landing is better.

4. Smoother.

5. Moves all at the same time.

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1. Too stiff. Also a bit choppy.

2. The sword just went right through him.

3. Run kinda sucked, check a tutorial.




By the way guys, how's this?

Its a little bit Choppy with little easing, however it doesn't look too bad.
You just need to ease out the back and the head at the end of the movement so it doesn't look so sudden when he stops.
You also need to make your limbs flow form the last frame.d
OH yeah and dont make the stickfigure slide when he crouches.

Yo Squeegy ur uppercut thing was the one from dardemon
i think
thats the one i got

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Its a little bit Choppy with little easing, however it doesn't look too bad.

Actually there's easing in there, like 5 frames of it, a lot for such a short animation.

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You just need to ease out the back and the head at the end of the movement so it doesn't look so sudden when he stops.

Don't know what you mean.

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You also need to make your limbs flow form the last frame.d

What? That doesn't make any sense.

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OH yeah and dont make the stickfigure slide when he crouches.

He never crouches, and he's sliding from the forward momentum. That's easing, isn't it?

4 Things Squeegy (Explaining Pf0 for you)

1. He meant the end probably, and it doesn't matter how big the anim is to whether you ease more or not, just don't get lazy, and put your time and effort into your anims to improve.
2. At the end it just seems like the head jerks down and it looks kinda awkward.
3. At the end the arms look wierd and don't flow well with everything.
4. When he bends forward, his leg slides instead of his knee bending, forcing you to slide his foot back yet again to have enough power for the jump.
-Die

Ok....NOW...this is my third animation



Edit: By the way, yes I know its choppy at some points but is it any better than the last one?

uhm run test

http://img254.imageshack.us/my.php?image=runnerdk2.gif

O.o....it looks more like hes sliding lol

ya its my first try at running

I'm gawna cry . . .
yeah anyway, work on your running a LOT
just make sure he doesn't . . . do whatever he was doing lol

dont cry cause i suck its ok im commiting suicide tommarow =)

Hello, I'm new to the forum and I've only been dong pivot in my spare time.

Here are some of my animations, comments please!

http://img246.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beamgg4.gif

http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beam2rk0.gif

Which one is better? I also might try doing one with one beam instead of many beams attached to each other because frankly that doesn't look like a "real" beam.

Here are some more animations:

http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=punchwe9.gif

I think the punch goes a little too fast...

http://img406.imageshack.us/my.php?image=kneeslamgd4.gif

That's it! Thanks for looking at them and make sure to leave some criticism.

A Pivot animation i made called "war"

Nice Animations t4t, work on it and you will be better