Honestly, it wasn't all that good. Theres lots of resizing, wobbliness and it lacked easing. You can do much better.

Another explosion... think I should add it to my avatar? Ok, I am anyway.

here is my firs easytoon

Acerocks, that can't get much choppier. It needs to be way more smooth. I couldn't understand what they were doing. Work on the walking, too.

A guy is saying "you will die !"



Please comment :)

@ Brian

You don't rate first timers, dammit.

@ Super

Where are my pupils? And fix the clenched hand in the last couple frames.

Easytoon explosion :)


Please comment, I think I need help on that, so you have have some tricks :) ...

@Trapart: You do rate first timers, as well as tell them what is wrong, you don't "RANK" first timers.
@superbenjis: Make less frames for the outburst, and slower dissentagration.
Your particles all go sideways, then some go down, and it looks weird.
Slow it down abit, and just try and make them go outwards.....MOAR PARTICLES!

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@ Brian You don't rate first timers, dammit.

You don't RANK first timers, but you DO tell them what to improve on. If no one does, they'll stay begginers, idiot.

this is my second one >_> <_<

yes i know its chppy and un smooth and stuff but HOW DO I WORK ON THAT?
its better thn my first one =P >_> <_<
i think i may have already posted it im nt shur

SephiSlash, increase the frame rate.

Umm sorry im like the biggest eztoon noob evah! so what should i increase it to?

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so what should i increase it to?

Whatever makes it fluent.

first easytoon in a while........

terix, i like it, it looks really cool, looks really realistic