Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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KeyWi

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Aug 16, 2008 1:56 AM #223559
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Aug 16, 2008 2:09 AM #223577
Sickk, but work on your movement, there is almoste no walking, they ar Stiff as hell, and work on your explosions, and other speed effects, like th scribbles.

that was awsome though, just work on the effects before you start on doing big stuf, like 2846 frames or somethin..
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Aug 16, 2008 2:37 AM #223606
Yes.yes. I understand.

It bothered me when I started 2000 -___-;; They were as frozen as cement. :3

I thank you for the critism. I shall try to remake and edit.:Happy:


I believe there were too many mistakes. So I might scrap this and restart
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Aug 16, 2008 6:50 AM #223928
KeyWi, all you really need to become a fairly good animator, is good movements.
So some tests, like the famous ball test.
Then do walking and running.

And, I think your particles need work to.
Overall nice animation.

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i wouldnt say beg it looks very nice go make a thread

I almost shit my pants.....
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Aug 16, 2008 6:55 AM #223934
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That's pretty good. Make a thread.
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Aug 17, 2008 10:06 AM #225044
im starting to make a big easytoon, so i thought i might post it here

here it is : http://img364.imageshack.us/img364/915/therunie3.gif

c&c:Smile:
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Aug 17, 2008 2:35 PM #225161
work more on the movements and effects
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Aug 18, 2008 1:08 AM #225773
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Aug 18, 2008 2:34 AM #225800
yeah.. um. we dont use embedded stuffs lol
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Aug 18, 2008 2:35 AM #225801
@Rahlaft , Coolness ! just that I noticed the resizing of the sword yea ? And cool word effects ;)
Now I know why you want the sword flash effects ;D
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Aug 18, 2008 3:14 AM #225824
Rahlaft, like it so far.
But I hope you edit it, like when he breaks out of the ground maybe have debri, or have it more jagged...
And I didn't like the part after "Super Speed" came up....
Really nice though!

And what does it say when he's jumping?
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Aug 18, 2008 9:11 AM #225951
Everyone copies multilockon dont they?
Rahlaft

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Aug 18, 2008 9:47 AM #225966
@ puinkey, well yea that was the reason i wanted those sword flashes, thx again
@stare, i am going to edit it for sure lol, ow about the jump it says stance 1, its kinda small lol

thx for the comments

edit: i forgot to add this : http://img117.imageshack.us/img117/3726/therungo7.gif

its a updat of the anime, at the moment the my frame count is on 202

i edited some frames and made some new ones

c&c plz
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Aug 18, 2008 1:11 PM #226058
It'll be epic in no time !
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Aug 18, 2008 1:31 PM #226063
thanks, that made me feel good lol