Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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NuclearFunFun

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Dec 13, 2008 6:06 PM #313709
xD hanahah i luv my sig i like your too nuclear :P

<3 <3 <3
Anyways-
I was inspired to make this flame attack, and I garuntee you that I will never animate fir for a long time :D
Something seems unnatural about him. C&C?
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Srry if its way too slow, stupid internet explorer >.<
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Dec 13, 2008 9:25 PM #313823
His legs seem a bit short compared to his arms. Also you've gone and made the flame go back into his hand, NAUGHTY! I know his hand is on fire but you should show it leaving his hand some what, add flame particles going off screen n what not. Speaking of particles you may want to add some as he moves his hand forward too. Not to mention the fire itself moves pretty erratically.
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Dec 13, 2008 11:06 PM #313912
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an air test type thing.. lol tell me what you think needs improvment
NuclearFunFun

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Dec 14, 2008 1:53 AM #314024
ty darkest white;
@ jonny;
add a bit more easing, and when he falls, he falls back towards the direction he jumped from. This may help the loop but it makes the animation really wierd lookin.
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Dec 14, 2008 1:59 AM #314029
no he does not it may be not getting what your trying to say but he lands and it is eased on the landing and then he quickly dahses NOTE: that when he falls i thinks there no more but a frame of easing
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Dec 14, 2008 5:16 AM #314149
http://img399.imageshack.us/img399/9665/newavatarso0.gif
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C&c on what should I improve?
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Dec 14, 2008 3:07 PM #314353
he needs more impact when he lands, when humans land after a high fall they land on their legs like they're shocks to dampen the impact. your stick kinda just stops immediately, halfway through bending his knees to absorb the impact.
it definitely looks a bit awkward the way he lands and the physics look off, but thats that only think i can get you for, mostly everything else is damn smooth
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Dec 14, 2008 3:15 PM #314356
http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stickbattle2fy3.gif

http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eztoonthingupdatecw5.gif

http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fullfigureap9.gif

http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stretchyarmcharacterimpbm7.gif

all my work so far
do you think i should be in the beginners section?
(sorry for double posting guys i forgot to put my images in the first time)
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Dec 14, 2008 4:11 PM #314380
Quote from zackfire17
http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stickbattle2fy3.gif

http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eztoonthingupdatecw5.gif

http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fullfigureap9.gif

http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stretchyarmcharacterimpbm7.gif

all my work so far
do you think i should be in the beginners section?
(sorry for double posting guys i forgot to put my images in the first time)

http://img120.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stickbattle2fy3.gif

http://img249.imageshack.us/my.php?image=eztoonthingupdatecw5.gif

http://img117.imageshack.us/my.php?image=fullfigureap9.gif

http://img201.imageshack.us/my.php?image=stretchyarmcharacterimpbm7.gif

you have potential man, your anims are good, I love the 3rd and 4th
you're good in effects, but works on movements, I think that's all

sorry I can't tell can you get out or no
NuclearFunFun

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Dec 14, 2008 4:43 PM #314401
zackfire17- dont post in beginner section, then make a new thread with the exact same post. its worthless
Lil_J93637

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Dec 15, 2008 6:09 AM #314851
These are all my easytoons to date:

First Explosion :
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Eye :
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First Fight :
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Freerunning Animation :
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Handsprings :
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Fire Style - Fireball Jutsu :
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First Fullbody :
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Happy Full No Body :
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So, am i a beginner?
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Dec 15, 2008 7:04 AM #314863
I think some of your anims are good, smooth and good effect, like the full body and the flip, but sry I don't know where should you be

how but my short one, fullbody kick
http://img517.imageshack.us/img517/659/fbkickpd0.gif
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Dec 15, 2008 7:07 AM #314864
Try taking it easy, or reduce frame rate. You dont really want the animation to speed by and not see whats happening. I learnt it by using pivot(lol) but others may have learned practicing movements in a mirror and animating what they saw.
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Dec 15, 2008 9:06 AM #314880
lol, thanks, how 'bout this one?
http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/6351/combo2cn7.gif

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salsapunisher101

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Dec 15, 2008 3:14 PM #314951
that one is much better.