Just change the frame rate. Also try to spend more time on your anims. A rushed anim is a bad anim. Try using thinner sticks too, try a 2 pixel brush.

my 3rd one

heres my next explosion it maybe not faster but you decide on that but this ones better than the last on

@ kid: Your not putting enough effort into your anims. The explosions still don't look like explosions, just squiggly blobs.

@ foo: the particles for the gun shot were nice but other than that the animation seemed rushed. The gun was just rotated, the sticks that got shot barely moved at all and the blood particles were too small and disapeared too fast.

I know it looks like crap, but I thought I would show you my very first easytoons:

Just wondering if this belongs inside or outside of the beginner's section.


And I gave you crit on msn, sephirin.

here is my first walk:

Well you've got some promise seph, work on your wobbliness a tad. Maybe try using line tool?

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Just wondering if this belongs inside or outside of the beginner's section.


And I gave you crit on msn, sephirin.

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I wish for C&C so I may get better, good sir.

my jumpin test:



stupid photobucket would not take my gif image lol

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I wish for C&C so I may get better, good sir.

'twas wobbly, and the physics were off.

@ devour: it was wobbly and the physics were way off.

@ seph: Exactly what I said to devour and it resized WAY too much.

I request your services once again.

Feet were sliding, still wobbly.

Could you give advice that helps? I'm not going to manage to make my animations not wobbily at all for a long time. So I'd like it if you said things that I could learn from.