Beginners, post your Easytoon animations here.

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Dec 14, 2009 8:54 AM #524429
The framerate issue will have to do with your browser, change to firefox or opera to fix it.

Now as you stated, the bouncing does look weird. That is because your moving the ball in straight lines, not nice curvy ones. Also the ball's speed is way off, it speeds up and slows down randomly. It should be be moving across the screen slower and slower and should speed up while going down, and slow while going up. (basic physics) Also, the ball bounces back up to the same height, this is bad, very bad, you bad little boy, bad bad bad. It should lose height with every bounce.

Now the particles are also not good. Particles generally start large, the become small, Yours are big and wobbly all through. Also, air resistance should effect them, thus, if they are moving they should become slower and slower until they stop or disappear.
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Dec 15, 2009 12:12 AM #524594
true frankoman its this simple the ball goes curved like a bracket only its not facing tha side (lol i suck at explaining)
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Dec 15, 2009 12:14 AM #524597
oh it needs to stay flattened a bit longer for like i dont know if its at 8 frames per second 3 frames
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Dec 16, 2009 8:46 AM #525109
well these are my first two i can believe how horrible they are :{

This one :
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Dec 16, 2009 8:57 AM #525113
well, you're just starting animation, you can't be expected to produce eye orgasming material. for first animations, they are pretty good.
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Dec 18, 2009 1:41 AM #525533
Oh Gosh My FIRST FIRST FIRST easy toons.........It's like going into the woods naked with a solar powerd flash light and an empty bag chips

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My First Easytoon I ever Watched was Metallic Knights

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yI8Zb3Is8D0

Actually this was the movie that introduced me to pivot.........But I figured out those were completly diffrent

Jeeze Easy Tune Is pretty hard
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I give respect to the easytoon people.......constantly drawing what happens next........I would love it If I got the Pen that you can wright on the computer with.......Then this would problably be easyer
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Well This is it.
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Thanks for watchin :D
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Dec 18, 2009 9:33 AM #525620
I saw the explosion challenge but i thought sense it was my first explosion to post it here.
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i think i should slow the frame rate a bit.
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Dec 19, 2009 12:45 AM #525759
:) just trying some stuff, i kinda dislike the one with the whip, but i'd post it anyway
http://www.truploader.com/view/051172
http://www.truploader.com/view/555533
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Dec 19, 2009 1:10 AM #525764
Another easy tune
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Dec 19, 2009 5:00 AM #525863
Moch - you need to add more easing and work on your particles. Also wobbliness and resizing is an issue on the sticks.

Tork - You have skill! Just work on the stiffness and lack of easing and you'll be great!
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Dec 19, 2009 8:12 PM #526111
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More Easy Toon
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Dec 19, 2009 8:13 PM #526114
Quote from Moch12
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More Easy Toon


it's pretty good, but you should work on the run, the spin and on resizing. keep going :P
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Dec 19, 2009 9:33 PM #526125
What tork said and wobbliness and particle & effect work.
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Dec 20, 2009 12:50 PM #526291
Just a random test.. I've got bored with it and decided not to finish, I don't think i've posted it here before.

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Dec 20, 2009 3:52 PM #526308
Foshizzle wtf are you doing in this section!

it says.....Beginners!but hey(takes a screenshot of foshizzles post)=D

*cough*...ummm.....good anim but a bit of inner-headed-ness when he says dead.(well i think its a he)