Kick (My best)

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Nov 16, 2008 12:23 AM #295244
I tried my absolute best on this.

18 fps:
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1226787392

8 fps:
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1226787489
This is so you can see it frame by frame.
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Nov 16, 2008 1:16 AM #295273
C'mon comments please, I worked hard on this.
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Nov 16, 2008 1:31 AM #295277
It wasn't bad! The stick could use some tidying up. I'd use a lower smoothing level in the brush (properties while brush tool is on > Smoothing).
Also, add a head.
Also, don't bump after 40 minutes...
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Nov 16, 2008 1:41 AM #295281
Quote from Kitsune
It wasn't bad! The stick could use some tidying up. I'd use a lower smoothing level in the brush (properties while brush tool is on > Smoothing).
Also, add a head.
Also, don't bump after 40 minutes...

Okay thanks.
I'll make another and edit it.

But can you see improvement?
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Nov 16, 2008 1:45 AM #295285
DONT ****IN USE SWFCABIN
i can't view any animations on that stupid site
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Nov 16, 2008 2:09 AM #295302
Ok time for me to help, I have seen you posting bad kicks.

[SIZE="3"]Problems[/SIZE]


1. It looks like he is lifting his leg forward.
2. The character build is horrible.

[SIZE="3"]Solutions[/SIZE]


1. Make the leg go backwards slowly, then speed up as it comes forward.
2. Make the characters a little skinnier and make them a full character, with a head legs longer arms and legs.

Trust me it adds to the realism of the animation.

Good Luck.
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Nov 16, 2008 2:39 AM #295313
SWFCABIN = >:(

Please upload to trportfolio or something
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Nov 16, 2008 3:20 AM #295338
please please please work on stick construction first!

Does this link work for you?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs

if it does use it to your full advantage!
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Nov 16, 2008 3:36 AM #295352
Quote from hyun
please please please work on stick construction first!

Does this link work for you?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zOouzsIPNWs

if it does use it to your full advantage!

Thanks it really helped!

You made it right?
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Nov 16, 2008 3:44 AM #295363
just for you baby.
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Nov 16, 2008 8:57 PM #296019
longer arms............please.......and........



oh forget it...keep up practicing.