short test

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ragingrasengan
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Mar 13, 2008 7:10 PM #91612

Short test with pencil, i seem to be rusting with flash for some reason so this is just a test, anything i can improve on ?

http://www.swfme.com/view/1187122

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Mar 13, 2008 7:31 PM #91625

sticks pretty wobbly, and the green blast went out to fast, ease it out make it desolve slower, over all 7/10

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Mar 13, 2008 9:24 PM #91685

It's preety good, but after seeing these horrable pencil tests, eccept this one this one's the best, I'm ganna STOP using the pencil.