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Bonk
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Nov 22, 2008 4:36 AM #299323
After a terrible stick animation, I made a little short warm up to get me back into fullbody.

I've never shaded before, so yeah I know that sucks. C&C
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Nov 22, 2008 4:44 AM #299329
I love it.

I never knew you were so good in flash.
Though, you need to work on the wobblyness of the arm.

Movements too. I'm no expert. But I saw the flaws.
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Nov 22, 2008 6:00 AM #299354
Be more specific with "movements"?

:3
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Nov 22, 2008 6:40 AM #299364
Like at the end after the kick his hand at the top was still moving. It isn't natural.
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Nov 22, 2008 11:46 AM #299457
I didn't see any wobblyness on the arm?

It was ****ing great!
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Nov 22, 2008 12:20 PM #299484
that's ggreat BUT if that guy is like his back is at our site why his head is on top... ? damn hard to explain... if you know what i mean his head is all the time in front... -_-
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Nov 22, 2008 1:52 PM #299515
Ooo yeah I didn't notice that. Thanks
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Nov 22, 2008 1:57 PM #299516
I love the actual pose and look of how the guy looked like, just...the movements needed tweaking
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Nov 22, 2008 2:04 PM #299518
The movements were not really good, maybe remove some frames?
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Nov 22, 2008 2:07 PM #299519
thats sweet.

Apart from the way the hands kept switching from
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Change that and Ill think its great.

Obviously its very stop-start, if you understand, but I quite like that. Others might not, but w/e >_> its something to consider changing.
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Nov 23, 2008 12:43 AM #299862
Yeah I always like big heavy stop start movements , thanks yall
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Nov 23, 2008 11:34 AM #300188
Change the head, it is ugly and ruins the body with the movements.
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