http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/189550

Review.

Come on it's good :O

Its goodness level is underneath my level of love i get at these damned forums.

listening to right now, my comment will be on NG

thanks, please rate and review.

i reviewed, check it out

God, when are they going to make a forum for this shit.

@Bongoe

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Anyway, it has a nice start although the repeating synth doesn't seem to be quite clear enough, there is a irritating hint of static to it, which then blocks out its actual melody.

The claps at about 1:20 are again to piercing and don't really blend in to it.

I love the change at the 1:50 mark, it is much crisper and, a more bodied sound, again you need to work on you balancing and equalizing. More variety in the main synth wouldn't go astray either, or at least another layer. As it is really, really boring after about the second loop. Actually skipped about 30 seconds.

Another change at the 4:00 mark, but this doesn't fit in with the two previous sections, and seems really out of place until the loop comes back in at the 4:40 mark. But again the repetition is really really anoying, more variety is needed desperately.

Gave up at the 5:30 mark just way to repetitive.

If you had cut it at about 3:30 it would be a lot better, but the end just goes on and on.

6/10

Quote from Bongoe

God, when are they going to make a forum for this shit.

It'd be a pure special interests forum that not many people would casually look at, so there's no need to make a section for it. Especially since all of the posts would require some kind of user feedback.

Trance/

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/189930

That acid synth that comes in doesn't fit with the original synth at all, even to the point where it sounds dissonant.

Trance generally follows a pattern, in which the initial melody leads to a breakdown, which introduces a new melody that usually closes the song. Obviously you don't have to strictly adhere to that, but if you make your song just a series of variations of a melody, it's going to get boring pretty quickly.

Add a bass, too. Your music sounds pretty empty.

you should put some low pass on the kick, its way too loud.

Thanks I will try.