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Playing with fire is bad, mkay.

very nice man, i really likey, especially with the way you adapt to new styles of animating, very cool, keep it up.

it is nice, but it's lacking something..... The beams and all are good, nice style....something isn't clicking....

Physics are off. The fire is badly animated, as well as the particles.
The colors you use for the fire are also bad, IMO.

Quote from Damocles

Physics are off. The fire is badly animated, as well as the particles.
The colors you use for the fire are also bad, IMO.

* click *


That would be it....

It looks nothing like fire.
Looks like a gay little beam shit that you tried to do.

Quote from Damocles

It looks nothing like fire.
Looks like a gay little beam shit that you tried to do.

the sticks movements are choppy and the beams looks more like lava O_o

The final blast was rather gay.....try making the aura go over the stick, and maybe try for a cloud masking to make it look like hot air.

It's good. I see you're trying to mimic Tentionmaru's style and it looks like you did it well.

It's good, but if you changed the colour of the beams it would look like a beam (it doesn't look like fire atm)

Thanks ya'll for the critics, I honestly don't agree with the colours being bad, but I shale change it tho.

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Thanks ya'll for the critics, I honestly don't agree with the colours being bad, but I shale change it tho.

well....try making the a bit darker maybe, and as far as highlights......highlights on fire?????

try to go for the different colors of "heatness", not highlights......highlights are good on most beams, like water or lightning, but on fire it seems just weird.

u should particlize the aura and smoke when he fires that last...fire

Yeah, that's right.

That is honestly the first time I've ever seen fire like that.
I Like it. :D
But it is missing something

maybe for the end fire move you could have made the fire swirl round rather then free transform tool.