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Mar 15, 2008 3:26 AM #92419
http://picshift.shiftlimits.com/files/75f33b53/8b1/swordsman.jpg

Yeah, easy guess for where I got the idea to draw this.
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Mar 15, 2008 4:32 AM #92455
argh. where is that from...
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Mar 17, 2008 3:47 AM #93868
ehm, i dont like it, because the hands arent good and i hate chinese hats :P
but all in all its a pretty nice pic ^^

and dont hate me for critics
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Mar 17, 2008 9:46 PM #94246
Quote from shudokai
ehm, i dont like it, because the hands arent good and i hate chinese hats :P
but all in all its a pretty nice pic ^^

and dont hate me for critics


Why the **** would i hate you for pointing out the bad and good things? I'll only get pissed off if someone just says it's bad, and gives no reason why, or any advice to get better. Sort of like ob1.
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Mar 17, 2008 9:51 PM #94252
It's an overall good pic. Work on proportions, and I think It's easier to draw with a sharper pencil.
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Mar 17, 2008 9:52 PM #94253
Yeah, I do too. My sharpener sucks though. =/

Thanks.
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Mar 17, 2008 10:19 PM #94268
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It's an overall good pic. Work on proportions, and I think It's easier to draw with a sharper pencil.


Yea Advice in bold. It make it look light and weird looking. But I like it the hat you did a good job on.
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Mar 18, 2008 2:22 PM #94648
Draw with a sharper pencil, yeah. But make the shades with the soft one. The right arm is out of proportions and I'd say the same for the left hand, unless you're going for the cartoonish look.The feet are too small.
Actually, the whole body just doesn't seem right.
I'd advise you to practice human body proportions. Just draw simplistic figures of human body as squares and circles. You'll get the hang of it soon.

The hat looks as if it was too small. If it's a straw hat then you did it wrong. Check some images of straw and learn their textures.

There's not much shading going on. The drawing seems flat.
And the line between the neck and the head is way too obvious.

Keep practicing k.
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Mar 22, 2008 12:29 AM #97419
That was pretty nice. But did you use the side of the pencil for the drawing.
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Mar 22, 2008 1:47 AM #97481
i think is was a graphite pencil. or charcoal ( fi i spelled that right
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Mar 22, 2008 1:52 AM #97486
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i think is was a graphite pencil. or charcoal ( fi i spelled that right


It was a regular pencil most people don't use special pencils.
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Mar 22, 2008 2:08 AM #97505
-.- well im a special boy...jk

It accualy looks pretty cool
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Mar 22, 2008 2:10 AM #97507
I used a number 2 pencil, the only "special" pencil I use is a sketching pencil.

And tbh, this is crap to me now.
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