Tell me what I did wrong, what I can improve on and if I should continue it or not.

Thanks. PS: Rushed on the posing, so don't post on how I could have better posing because I already know.

Anyone gonna comment?

Lol i relly like it. I relly like the stupid man xDDD He is so silly lol.

Uhmm, bums.. and.. uh.. trumpets.. and.. green.. nice..

"HyDrO" Eh, what?

On topic;
I didn't laugh. But the concept's humorous.
Don't really know what else to say, sorry.

But seriously WHat the funk, HyDrO?

I didn't really laugh. Some of the facial expressions didn't really fit the mood of the text. I like the idea and everything, but it didn't exactly succeed.

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"HyDrO" Eh, what?

But seriously WHat the funk, HyDrO?

Sry i know my English sux! I said I really like the man because he is very stupid. ^^

Damn its a great idea but the posing is not so good.
keep working on it, i want to know what happens downstairs ^^
...!!MORE BLOOOD!!...
...and maybe some cute teddybears xD

Go here, I posted the whole episode.

http://forums.facepunchstudios.com/showthread.php?t=511143

eeeeh .... *see bums* ..... the answer is green!
oh its not the right answer ... goddammit!

Thanx for the link ^^

eeeehm ... dragonball Z??
Damn yore funny :P
where do you get those screenshots?!?

The ones in Gmod?

I just used the camera tool...

aaargh! what the "ppeeep" is Gmod?
i mean the whole "The Mystery" is just a row of screenshots right?

AAAW! your sig! ... i cant reisist! aaaaargh! GOD DAMN!!!

It's Garry's Mod.

doesnt really help me xD
but forget it i like the "comic" ^^