HAZMAT Doodle

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Dec 9, 2008 7:46 AM #310834
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Dec 9, 2008 8:40 PM #311023
Looks pretty gay.
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Dec 9, 2008 10:08 PM #311073
Quote from kinto
Looks pretty gay.


That wasn't really needed, was it?

The head looks too small in comparison with the body and it seems to lack detail. The shading could be better and the lines are pretty messy. It looks too lifeless, some heavy shading in the right places and it would be pretty smart.
I do like the face, though.

Good work, man. Keep it up.
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Dec 9, 2008 10:47 PM #311098
Looks like he's cramped inside a closet. Try more interesting poses.
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Dec 10, 2008 1:26 AM #311232
Quote from LakE
That wasn't really needed, was it?


Don't mind him, he just likes to randomly insult me for no reason.

The head looks too small in comparison with the body and it seems to lack detail. The shading could be better and the lines are pretty messy. It looks too
lifeless

Well i sort of intended it to be lifeless, because it's like a full body suit so you can't really tell if it's a person or a robot. Although yeah I draw really sloppy so that's something I need to work on.
, some heavy shading in the right places and it would be pretty smart.
I do like the face, though.

Good work, man. Keep it up.

Yeah the shading wasn't enough, but I don't think shading more of it would do much, because I shaded the parts correctly for how they were built in my mind. Do you mean making the shading more pronounced? Because if you mean that, then I feel you.