Santa is coming... {STW}

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Dec 9, 2008 6:03 PM #310964
This is probly my best animation by far , also this is my entry to the collab , and I'm really proud of it actually , so yeah lets not delay this any longer.

http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=884558
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Dec 9, 2008 6:11 PM #310970
Wow, dude, you have improved. There were some resizes and the v-cam movements were jerky. You could draw the background better.
Other than that it was nice. :3
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Dec 9, 2008 6:14 PM #310972
haha, it's awesome stormwalker :]
I think the sticks look a little fat, but it's style.
Good work :]
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Dec 9, 2008 6:22 PM #310973
Not bad, not bad at all. I'm not a real big fan of the fat sticks but, looks fine none the less.
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Dec 9, 2008 7:27 PM #311003
Thanks :) And they aren't fat , its because of the vcam , they are just zoomed in closely.
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Dec 9, 2008 7:34 PM #311008
Hmm, are you allowed to post it? Not sure. But it was really good, maybe try giving him a santa hat? that'd be cool.
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Dec 9, 2008 7:49 PM #311011
Quote from jomax
Hmm, are you allowed to post it? Not sure. But it was really good, maybe try giving him a santa hat? that'd be cool.


I am , I asked. And I tried to add the Santa hat but it was too difficult and messy to get right.
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Dec 9, 2008 7:50 PM #311012
thats really good man! Your stuff looks kinda like Zedd's style of animating now xD
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Dec 9, 2008 8:13 PM #311016
Yay! Thanks Hyun <3
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Dec 10, 2008 11:40 AM #311536
Oh come on... Bump!
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Dec 10, 2008 12:03 PM #311540
It was jerky. I couldn't really understand much of it.

Its messy though. I'd like to see the animation with out the v-cam.
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Dec 10, 2008 12:52 PM #311542
Wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy too zoomed in there buddy.

And it looks like you stretched your animation too.
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Dec 10, 2008 4:05 PM #311583
No I wont bother posting the version without the Vcam , because theres a background switch so , and well Saha if you cant see properly its not my problem , most people could so...
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Dec 10, 2008 5:22 PM #311599
Sticks are poorly drawn and they resizing 24/7.
The blood could use some work, seemed to lazy.
Other than that and the complexity of the zooming which had no need it was good.
Bg could use some touching up on n shit.
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Dec 11, 2008 12:50 PM #312329
Uhh... whenever I improve , everyone makes it even worse then it was before. lol but w/. And more comments. And atleast try to help me instead of politely shitting on my anim (called c&c).