After three weeks, It's done

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jomax

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Dec 13, 2008 3:28 PM #313642
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=981182

Yay finally. Sorry for not having the authentic sound in the end, just couldn't find it. Thanks to you guys who've helped me. And btw it says Majoh cause thats me on brokensource community.

So C&C please

Forgot to say, thanks to Cocio also for telling me continue on this and giving C&C
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Dec 13, 2008 3:50 PM #313652
The end was kinda epic.
But **** dude, it's brilliant.
GREAT WORK!
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Dec 13, 2008 3:56 PM #313653
Thank you sir, what a generous comment :D
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Dec 13, 2008 4:34 PM #313668
Your welcome my good friend!
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Dec 13, 2008 4:34 PM #313669
Finally.
Yeah like I said in Pm's, people will love it.
Didn't expect that at the end though but meh =p
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Dec 13, 2008 5:17 PM #313685
Very cool. The credits were obviously mixed up, but the animation was good.

I liked it a lot.
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Dec 13, 2008 5:48 PM #313703
that's messed up :Þ

græt jØß

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Dec 13, 2008 7:45 PM #313759
Rawgreen shut up, if you don't have anything to say.
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Dec 13, 2008 8:04 PM #313765
It's alright, but the fighting didn't last very long, and the ending was bleh.
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Dec 13, 2008 8:05 PM #313764
It's alright, but the fighting didn't last very long, and the ending was bleh.
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Dec 13, 2008 8:16 PM #313772
No, you absoloutely ruined that with that ending.
You shouldnt end it like that, it doesnt fit.

Please change it. I really liked most of the rest of it..
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Dec 13, 2008 10:15 PM #313861
It was awesome.
This - shoop + 2 weeks = on stickpages frontpage
You just inspired me.
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Dec 13, 2008 10:22 PM #313876
Thank you guys for the generous comments.

@ Mesmay, yeah the shoop was just a way to end it. Was really bored and wanted to move on to new projects.

@Projectzeta, Indeed the credits part sucked but it was not really what i focused on ;)

My next animation will be alot better and without lazy endings ;) I promise, it's already about 800 frames of sketches.

Again, thanks
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Dec 14, 2008 12:16 AM #313959
Quote from Mesmay
No, you absoloutely ruined that with that ending.
You shouldnt end it like that, it doesnt fit.

Please change it. I really liked most of the rest of it..


I actually thought it fit : P It was a serious like moment I know, but still. I don't find it that misplaced, I actually loled.

I loved it man. It was laggin a bit here >_> but yea, fullbody, nice.
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Dec 14, 2008 12:23 AM #313968
i first noticed the lousy character models, work on picking out more realistic colours, and work on your shading.
the movments were good, but not great.
the ending caught me off guard and it made me smirk, which is a good thing.
it was a great effort and well done.