HotelLeenug
Started by: LN3uq | Replies: 12 | Views: 1,868
LN3uq2Posts: 2,457
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I haven't made shit in a long time, so I'm a bit out of practice. However, this one seems to be pretty good by my standards. What does spp thin
NCz2Posts: 337
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View Profile i thin that the little sign thing on the far right kills the whole picture. Otherwise it's loverly.
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View Profile In retrospect, it seems kind of bright as well.
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View Profile In retrospect, it seems kind of bright as well.
The contrast is cool though. The eye naturally goes to the area with the largest contrast. In this case, it works well, bringing the viewer to the focal area.
I don't like the washed out are to the left of his face, but it's pretty damn cool over all. Nice work.
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View Profile Here's another version, without some of the stuff on the right. I think it might look better without it anyway.

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View Profile looks alright but what's with the random dude? all these sigs I see are always centered around some person or character....
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View Profile I don't know who he is, I just liked the picture.
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View Profile The second version looks great. I like the fade from very processed on the left to pretty clear on the right, seperated by that guy. It's great.
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View Profile His name is Ethan something or other.
Great sig, that guy is a good actor.
ExileAdministrator2Posts: 8,404
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View Profile Yeah, it's Ethan Hawke.
Looks good, though it looks like something is overlapping his shirt to the left. It's probably the shading, or might be something you put over it, but either way it's kind of distracting.
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View Profile I know I know a movie he's in but I don't know which. Someone yell out movie titles till I get it.
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View Profile Yeah, it's Ethan Hawke.
Looks good, though it looks like something is overlapping his shirt to the left. It's probably the shading, or might be something you put over it, but either way it's kind of distracting.
fix'd I think.

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View Profile I see what you took out, that wasn't it.
For some reason today I can see it in a different way than yesterday, and it looks fine. I was talking about his sleeve which almost looks like it forms an eliptical line with the effects to the left, but now it doesn't look bad.
@Uberscahll, the only one I can recall him being a big part in is Lord of War.