Nature's Forces
Started by: Krob | Replies: 8 | Views: 1,381
Jan 18, 2009 12:11 AM #339734
Jan 18, 2009 1:22 AM #339771
it's pretty bad. Your color choice is horrendous, and the "glow" around the world is weird.
Jan 18, 2009 2:46 AM #339807
I didn't think it was that bad..
I mean elaborate on what you think the colors should look like.
I mean elaborate on what you think the colors should look like.
Jan 18, 2009 2:52 AM #339812
To be honest the only problem I saw was how fast the contrast went from blue to brown. Make it more subtle....like, make the contrast ratio higher between shades. Maybe a blue-ish brown if there's such a thing.
Jan 18, 2009 10:28 AM #339985
Pretty cool, the only thing I attest to is that the animals should be slightly curved, to fit with the natural curvature of the earth.
Jan 18, 2009 10:39 AM #339988
I really liked it. It has this really cool feel to it. Nice transparencies.
Jan 18, 2009 11:14 AM #339998
It looks pretty good, I like the array of colors, and how it seems like you can see the atmosphere on the rim of the earth. Mostly near the upper-left side. Although there were some parts where the glow was blatantly erased, and perhaps you should make it blur/blend more into the background so it isn't so obvious.
Jan 18, 2009 1:37 PM #340042
The orca seems like its just erased badly around the edges and just pasted in. the whole picture seems kind of like a collection of animals overlayed on the earth.
try to make them blend more naturally and dynamically with the earth.
The lower left is very confusing, I see a boar, with some bush environment around him? that shouldn't be there, only the boar would have been enough, this makes it messy and confusing.
what needs fixing?
-color flow
-animal blending with the earth
-clearer choice of pictures(these look kinda static and pasted in, try to find dynamic pictures like if they where to jump out of the picture.)
-better overall clean up(non-noticable erased edges)
try to make them blend more naturally and dynamically with the earth.
The lower left is very confusing, I see a boar, with some bush environment around him? that shouldn't be there, only the boar would have been enough, this makes it messy and confusing.
what needs fixing?
-color flow
-animal blending with the earth
-clearer choice of pictures(these look kinda static and pasted in, try to find dynamic pictures like if they where to jump out of the picture.)
-better overall clean up(non-noticable erased edges)
Jan 18, 2009 4:17 PM #340130
Quote from Mr.Pancake
The lower left is very confusing, I see a boar, with some bush environment around him? that shouldn't be there, only the boar would have been enough, this makes it messy and confusing.
Actually, what I was trying to do was have all the animals slightly covered in their camouflage. Boar - Jungle, Whale - Waves, Bear - Forest, Eagle - Mountains, but I couldn't do it without it looking extremely sloppy.
And thanks for C&C