Bonk's BSE Combo #2

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Jan 20, 2009 2:21 AM #341297
When watching this you'll notice that it is not fullbody.

Well, I've decided that for small multi-round competitions like this stick is easier and MUCH quicker, so now I won't spent hours on something that gets a low score :[

So anyway, here is my animation. It is my very first "line" stick animation and only my second stick animation. Be gentle please.

This is what Orange gets for trying to shake hands.
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Jan 20, 2009 3:12 AM #341332
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so now I won't spent hours on something that gets a low score :[


it isnt nessecerily (dangit, spelling sry) the score that you get, you improve, but its your decision

good work, it was smooth, good movements and the punch effect things were cool too, but i could see some resizing
the sounds also could of been better
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Jan 20, 2009 3:49 AM #341372
pretty good, I like the design of your name, I think I'll play around with stuff like that.,....
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Jan 20, 2009 4:08 AM #341394
I agree with what Nukednut said.

Good as always...
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Jan 20, 2009 4:19 AM #341407
kick 5 was a bit bad, maybe it needed easing? =/

But nice, as usual, <3
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Jan 20, 2009 5:55 AM #341503
Great, as always, no real problems
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Jan 20, 2009 6:53 AM #341525
Darn, Bonk, don't quit FB just because a darn judge rates you low. O_O Where's your self-esteem?

It's pretty ok considering even though it's your first stick you've done FB before. FB -> stick is easy... sort of...
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Jan 21, 2009 12:11 AM #341972
Quote from nukednut
it isnt nessecerily (dangit, spelling sry) the score that you get, you improve, but its your decision

good work, it was smooth, good movements and the punch effect things were cool too, but i could see some resizing
the sounds also could of been better


Thanks, although the resizing on the flip kick was for emphasis. I do agree that the sounds suck though :]

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pretty good, I like the design of your name, I think I'll play around with stuff like that.,....


Grr that's the best part? :] Thanks dood.

Quote from starscream
I agree with what Nukednut said.

Good as always...


Yay thanks.

Quote from Rabstar
kick 5 was a bit bad, maybe it needed easing? =/

But nice, as usual, <3


Yeah I had trouble with that one, there was some choreography issues that mucked it up. Thanks.

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Great, as always, no real problems
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Woo! Thanks.

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Darn, Bonk, don't quit FB just because a darn judge rates you low. O_O Where's your self-esteem?

It's pretty ok considering even though it's your first stick you've done FB before. FB -> stick is easy... sort of...


:/ Not necessarily. But yeah thanks.
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Jan 21, 2009 12:26 AM #341984
Great job Bonk. You did pretty well being new to sticks I guess.
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Jan 21, 2009 4:08 AM #342177
Second stick animation? Dam, thats pro. Well done! :)
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Jan 21, 2009 3:25 PM #342373
The reactions of the guy getting hit seemed kinda bad, stiff I guess would be the right word. The hits themselves didn't seem very hard either.
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Jan 22, 2009 5:09 AM #342823
you're pretty good at stick. i guess you could switch on and off between stick and fb, or maybe even have the fb do a combo on the stick, or vice versa.

the animations you made so far are pretty creative, keep it up in the rounds to come
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Jan 23, 2009 3:17 AM #343445
Thanks y'all, it makes my day.
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Jan 25, 2009 1:47 AM #344835
nice job. it was rly smooth and clear. i it wouldnt hurt to make the screen move with the stick ppl, and a lil bit longer, but thats just my opinion.
its gr8
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Jan 26, 2009 2:24 AM #345783
Yeah, I was thinking of doing that. Thanks.