my second stick anim

Started by: yoshi4546 | Replies: 4 | Views: 154

yoshi4546

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Mar 19, 2008 6:07 PM #95616
a guy jumping of a cliff
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Mar 19, 2008 6:11 PM #95621
Umm i know im supposed to give constructive crit and not be an A-Hole but that was horrid. Ummm work on it?
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Mar 19, 2008 8:57 PM #95683
ok.......you should make his legs move rather stay still and work on easing, animting, and just explore flash so you know all the tricks of flash. you might want to start out with line tool but its your choice
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Mar 20, 2008 12:47 PM #96333
Quote from Flashorama
Umm i know im supposed to give constructive crit and not be an A-Hole but that was horrid. Ummm work on it?


oh wow great advice!
Seriously man i aint gonna lie, my reviews arent much different from yours... But dont let it get to you... Just try to make your flashes last a bit longer, and use some different shades of blood.. And also, it will help you heaps if you use more than one layer! Make a new layer for each individual Item. In this case: One for the cliff. One for the Person, and one for the blood.. Well... Thats what i would do...:Ohhhhh:
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Apr 22, 2008 11:52 AM #120824
lol

btw, i am bumbing all of yoshi's things :D