Some Moves

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Malskaer
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Mar 19, 2008 9:11 PM #95695
I know i have been a ****o o_O

sry...


http://www.swfup.com/file/160317
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Mar 20, 2008 6:57 PM #96463
bump.. .
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Mar 20, 2008 8:11 PM #96487
The explosion was a bit too.....Orderly.

The particles seem to disappear in a really organized fashion, which is never good. Make it wild and unpredictable with explosions. The sparks only jut out and particalize in a few frames. It doesn't stay with the smoke.

Also heres how physics go:
frame 1-5: anticipation
6-10, a fast upbringing,
11-15 going up and down slowly to peak the hight of the jump and to ease motions
15-18, a fast downfall.

That is nearly what you want. Not exactly, just approximate it.
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Mar 20, 2008 9:16 PM #96537
Hey Kitsune, why are you spending so much time in the Flash Section all of a sudden? You usually post in sections like Main or General Help.

I usually disregard physics when commenting on animations and focus on how appealing the animation looks, but that flip was pretty bad. Also, I don't like how the stickfigures are drawn.

Sorry, I just don't.

And add some particles in the explosion. And more easing on all movements.
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Mar 21, 2008 12:58 AM #96716
the explosion was but too slow and static