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Feb 2, 2009 10:02 AM #350675
hey guys here's my progress in the sequel of my animation.. hope you guys like it..

tips would help and suggestions


http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=621449


BTW: i could use help in the preloader
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Feb 2, 2009 10:03 AM #350677
I just... I'm stunned... I really don't know what to say better XD It's just amazing, I can't help making it better cause it's perfect to me.
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Feb 2, 2009 11:27 AM #350717
For some reason, it looked like they were having gay sex.


Ummm ... Yeah ...
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Feb 2, 2009 11:42 AM #350725
Awesome just awesome good job :D
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Feb 2, 2009 12:31 PM #350750
thanks guys anymore c and c
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Feb 2, 2009 12:37 PM #350752
That was good dude.
I say just continue it.

Couldn't find any MAJOR flaws at all.
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Feb 2, 2009 1:09 PM #350768
The blood was scrappy and took away from the polished feel of the rest of the animation, but otherwise it was pretty badass. Although there wasn't much FBF animation at all.
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Feb 2, 2009 2:40 PM #350807
Quote from Bonk
The blood was scrappy and took away from the polished feel of the rest of the animation, but otherwise it was pretty badass. Although there wasn't much FBF animation at all.


yeah thanks.. 1 problem is that i am having a hard time animating the blood when the first enemy got hit by an axe in the head.. dunno how to execute the blood
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Feb 2, 2009 4:24 PM #350836
As Bonk said, the blood didn't fit the animation, it's a real different style. Secondly, even though the idea is original, I don't really like the lack of animation going on. But the effects ARE nice! I can help you with the preloader if you want.
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Feb 3, 2009 12:13 AM #351101
I hated it =/
No major movements, no storyline that can bee seen, full body versions of stick figures are weird, the blood shouldn't be a single movie clip.

Rawr :3
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Feb 3, 2009 12:14 AM #351103
Quote from Lixu
As Bonk said, the blood didn't fit the animation, it's a real different style. Secondly, even though the idea is original, I don't really like the lack of animation going on. But the effects ARE nice! I can help you with the preloader if you want.


sure preloader would be great lixu..
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Feb 3, 2009 8:58 AM #351297
Alright, tell me the dimensions, background colour maybe, and it would be great to have a picture or something from your head-characters :-)
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Feb 3, 2009 10:39 AM #351304
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Alright, tell me the dimensions, background colour maybe, and it would be great to have a picture or something from your head-characters :-)


im kinda not used to this lol since you changed and your good now.. ^^, ok ill just add you in msn.. just pm me your msn kai?
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Feb 3, 2009 4:22 PM #351368
I thought it was pretty damn cool, some of the body parts looked a little bit square though.
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Feb 4, 2009 12:12 AM #351631
Quote from proslayar
I thought it was pretty damn cool, some of the body parts looked a little bit square though.


oh yesh.. it's my style so that the muscles of the body would be exagerrated