part of project theta that im making for the clan deadzone(group of animators)

its not done but i just wanted to get some ideas on where i should go next


this is the whole version..pretty slow at the beggining if you ask me

This is part i really want comments on...i think its nice


Part Two-One of my favoritve animations-Inspired alot by Twilightsnipe,youalwaysyell, and puinkey....

Comments please...where should i go next?....does the black guy or the white guy win?...does a piece of cake eat them all?
i leave my animation in your hands...

awesome.... only awesome.. i like your animations... are u using line tool, or just brush?

Quite good, if you got a bit of mentoring from Puinkey, you'd be as good as him...maybe..

thanks man! and i use mostly the pen tool, i only line for the background and speelines

Update: im really getting to the good part, anysuggestions on where to go next?
and yes...i know i forgt the speedlines near the end, but ill add those later

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needs more movements :\
although some parts are good .
(hates circle tool )

Update:
I know some parts look a little shaky and the beams could be better, but i like the way it's going, also when i put an update, should i start to shorten the animation or should i just bring up the whole thing?

oh and check my youtube account, www.youtube.com/user/denuchi1 ... add me as a friend if you like what you see...