Venom.

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Feb 6, 2009 9:08 PM #353097
I post here once in a while, as you can see.

http://brokensource.activebb.net/images-f8/gift-for-jousteh-t290.htm#5991
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Feb 6, 2009 11:37 PM #353147
it's fairly good, keep up the art in photoshop :D. the teeth look very weird, not sure if they're meant to. I do not watch spiderman... and only seen the movie with the robot armed guy in it :P
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Feb 7, 2009 1:12 AM #353191
the portfolio is wrong. The bridge of his forhead would have kept going to his lips, not ended at his eyebrow. (if he had a nose, THAT would continue, mostly, to the bridge of his lip. (the inward gap))

also, venom doesnt have a massive underbite (or is it an overbite? never remember) he has a massive jaw. Good rendering, though.
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Feb 7, 2009 2:06 AM #353209
Quote from tomocles
the portfolio is wrong. The bridge of his forhead would have kept going to his lips, not ended at his eyebrow. (if he had a nose, THAT would continue, mostly, to the bridge of his lip. (the inward gap))

also, venom doesnt have a massive underbite (or is it an overbite? never remember) he has a massive jaw. Good rendering, though.


Underbite it is. And I'm fully agree. Also the cyclops isn't working for me.
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Feb 14, 2009 10:41 PM #357516
cam you have just one link please next time
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Feb 15, 2009 7:46 AM #357747
what ever Im new hear how do you give me tips and all put you on my project do you now whey becouse you get $1,00000000,0000000 just for working for me bye


Im zane THE KILLER
where ever you are if I dont get what Iwhant when I want Ill come where ever you are becouse I kie richest kid of this genaration Ill KILL YA Over and out
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Feb 15, 2009 10:09 AM #357779
I think he needs to be shiny, and a darker colour. Otherwise, great :]
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Feb 15, 2009 12:56 PM #357840
or, you know, could have just posted the deviantart link, and not a link to some stupid forum.
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Jul 10, 2009 1:42 PM #456903
Quote from zane the killer
what ever Im new hear how do you give me tips and all put you on my project do you now whey becouse you get $1,00000000,0000000 just for working for me bye


Im zane THE KILLER
where ever you are if I dont get what Iwhant when I want Ill come where ever you are becouse I kie richest kid of this genaration Ill KILL YA Over and out


wait what
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Jul 13, 2009 12:17 AM #458192
Post it somewhere that you don't have to be a member to see it dipshit.
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Jul 13, 2009 2:16 AM #458267
myself be bumpin