New PW. Continue?

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psykofr33k

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Mar 21, 2008 5:07 PM #97081
Yeah. New PW against three other people. Not much except for the end. Rank? Continue?

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soulworld05

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Mar 21, 2008 5:32 PM #97100
It look really good and smooth to me.
psykofr33k

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Mar 21, 2008 6:06 PM #97130
Thanks. Um... a little crit?
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Mar 21, 2008 6:16 PM #97135
Nice! Everything is amazing. Id say...low interz or so. It's really smooth an everything, I like it. Nice job.
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Mar 21, 2008 6:21 PM #97137
The lid of the box just seems to stay in place. It's lifted then just stops. But, i think that's because of the free-frame thing you were doing, yeh?
When the guy on the right is knocked to the ground, his leg seems to stay bend for a tad too long.

I quite liked it, though. You should continue it.
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Mar 21, 2008 6:26 PM #97140
Yeah, the whole box part didn't go as planned.
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Mar 21, 2008 7:35 PM #97194
Eh, it was okay. Most of it was incredibly simple, for example the falling box. >_>
Lol. However, I can't say I didn't like it. You do have a good understanding of easing, despite your spacing sometimes looking a bit weird (to me, anyway). A really good point was the punching at the end, with the 'wtf?'. That was mostly excellent.
Tbh I can't find much more wrong with it.
The only real problem is the simplicity.
It's painfully basic.
CONTINYOOOOOOOOOOOOO plz
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Mar 22, 2008 3:21 AM #97556
i liked a nice simple smooth anim 8.5/10
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Mar 22, 2008 6:21 AM #97664
at the end part, maybe try messing with the knockback of the guy on the left. the physics seem just a bit off. other than that it looks really smooth, and realistic.