tell me what you think

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/213483


http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/213803 <--(NEWEST VERSION)

new song i made today

thanks guys an gals :-)

I don't know shit about trance music, but it seemed good to me.

Bass is very loud, doesn't blend with the track. The arpeggiated chords seem panned to the left, too, that's kind of distracting

The piano was cool. The rhythm was shaky, but it sounded nice.

This doesn't really sound like trance until the ending, which sounded great. Everything else was kind of empty.

Did you write everything yourself or do you use arps/loops?

thanks guys, and hey prospect i was hoping you'd post here since youre good with this kind of music.. Im only trying it so im not too great. Ill take your advice onboard and make some changes.

and yeah i write everythign note by note.

thanks again

BUMP, sorry about the double post.. Ive just finished the song off and the new link is in my first post. Let me know if its better etc.. compare etc.

thanks