A couple of shorts im working on

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Feb 17, 2009 4:58 PM #359182
http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=536521

This will be entitled Paradise. It will follow a number of peoples shitty lives. Kinda like monkey dust

http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=764070

This one im not sure yet, but I started working on it after I saw a cool anime film called Mind Games and I started making an audio track containing voice acting and stuff. I know it all looks very rough etc, its nowhere near started let alone finished.

crit is welcome etc
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Feb 17, 2009 5:35 PM #359209
I love the first one
May I be your number one fan?
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Feb 17, 2009 6:13 PM #359226
twas good. In the second one, the dart was unrealistic in being thrown.

what did you use to make your sig?
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Feb 17, 2009 8:16 PM #359253
Yay i have a number 1 fan!

thanks guys.

i made my sig with a pen and pencil.. then photoshopped it
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Feb 17, 2009 8:19 PM #359255
yah the first one looks great. cant wait till you finish...ANYTHING

annoying thing is you could so easily be a well recognised animator, but you have nothing finished so you have nothing to show :P
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Feb 17, 2009 9:17 PM #359282
hahaha you know me all to well fitzy my friend..

Im gonna have to start finishing things arnt i haha.

hows things on your end?
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Feb 17, 2009 9:37 PM #359288
Quote from fitzy
annoying thing is you could so easily be a well recognised animator, but you have nothing finished so you have nothing to show :P


hes right :0


by the way, i LOVE the audio used.
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Feb 17, 2009 10:04 PM #359314
well thanks buddy :)

which one? or both?

i record all of the audio myself.

the track in the first one though is aphex twin - rhubarb.
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Feb 17, 2009 10:41 PM #359335
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hahaha you know me all to well fitzy my friend..

Im gonna have to start finishing things arnt i haha.

hows things on your end?


yah i do...although i dont see you on msn too often these days :-/

LOL i remember when us 2 used to be about the same skill level, how times change :P but yah you need to finish stuff

my end isnt bad, although i finish stuff nearly as rarely as you :P actually its not that i start something and dont finish it, its either that i dont start stuff...or i work on stuff for too long cuz i just cba with it anymore but still take the stance that im gonna finish it (aka xiao style 3 >_>).

hope you finish these soon dude :) i look forward to the top one if you get it finished especially
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Feb 17, 2009 11:01 PM #359344
hehe youre actually a lot better at animating sticks than i am nowadays!

lab shutdown is awesome.

add my msn bro : jevonjames@live.co.uk

not sure if i have you on that one.
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Feb 17, 2009 11:05 PM #359345
you remind me a lot of david firth
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Feb 17, 2009 11:14 PM #359352
I like them, well animated :) keep at it.
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Feb 18, 2009 12:45 AM #359396
hey thanks stephen :)

and the comparison to david firth is awesome, thanks for the compliment :D