****ing smooth punch
Started by: Flood | Replies: 16 | Views: 1,239 | Closed
Feb 18, 2009 2:41 AM #359510
Its like my 3rd pivot. I'm a flasher, lol.
Blaxo
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Feb 18, 2009 3:41 AM #359535
there's somthin weird about but i dont know what...but the punch was smooth!
Feb 18, 2009 4:10 AM #359551
Thanks! :3
Anymore comments?
Anymore comments?
Feb 18, 2009 4:53 AM #359569
Put more emphasis in the back, and a little more easing nigguh.
Feb 18, 2009 11:02 AM #359650
Mby the step forwards was to fast?
Feb 18, 2009 2:11 PM #359697
Beginner thread, simple as that.
Until you fix the stiffness caused by not enough joints being moved, it will never be smooth.
Until you fix the stiffness caused by not enough joints being moved, it will never be smooth.
Feb 18, 2009 10:23 PM #359913
Let's start at the bottom and work our way up, shall we?
Okie dokes, the legs don't bend at all. For such a vigorous punch he doesn't bend down at all. The step is also too quick, the step should still be going and ending just after the punch happens. Also, during the build-up to the punch, the legs should maybe bend back a bit with the back.
The back suddenly jerks forwards and backwards which isn't realistic. Again, for such a big punch it should ease back into the "natural position" slower, a few frames after the punch happens, the legs and the back should compliment eachother's movements.
The arms themselves look very nice, however for a successful punch it is not just about the arms. Like the back, they move too quickly back into the "natural position". For the whole thing to look right work on what I've said above, it's about the whole body. It looks like you read a tutorial for your punch, remember in tutorials though to look at the other parts of the body too!
Neat work (Pivot's all about trial and error), for now post your Pivots in the "Beginner's Section" until you get more skilled. Keep reading tutorials, they're really helpful. For a while you'll almost be just copying everything from tutorials but everyone develops their own styles.
Okie dokes, the legs don't bend at all. For such a vigorous punch he doesn't bend down at all. The step is also too quick, the step should still be going and ending just after the punch happens. Also, during the build-up to the punch, the legs should maybe bend back a bit with the back.
The back suddenly jerks forwards and backwards which isn't realistic. Again, for such a big punch it should ease back into the "natural position" slower, a few frames after the punch happens, the legs and the back should compliment eachother's movements.
The arms themselves look very nice, however for a successful punch it is not just about the arms. Like the back, they move too quickly back into the "natural position". For the whole thing to look right work on what I've said above, it's about the whole body. It looks like you read a tutorial for your punch, remember in tutorials though to look at the other parts of the body too!
Neat work (Pivot's all about trial and error), for now post your Pivots in the "Beginner's Section" until you get more skilled. Keep reading tutorials, they're really helpful. For a while you'll almost be just copying everything from tutorials but everyone develops their own styles.
Feb 18, 2009 10:34 PM #359918
:o Someone who gives good comments?!
OH NO.
IT IS THE END OF THE WORLD!
RUN RUN!
*runs far far away*
AAAH!
BANG BANG!
OMFG , ITS HERE!
NO NOT THE FACE!
HUMPFGGSERLL??!!
Ugh.........
OH NO.
IT IS THE END OF THE WORLD!
RUN RUN!
*runs far far away*
AAAH!
BANG BANG!
OMFG , ITS HERE!
NO NOT THE FACE!
HUMPFGGSERLL??!!
Ugh.........
Jontiways
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Feb 19, 2009 12:34 PM #360173
Quote from poppetje3D:o Someone who gives good comments?!
OH NO.
IT IS THE END OF THE WORLD!
RUN RUN!
*runs far far away*
AAAH!
BANG BANG!
OMFG , ITS HERE!
NO NOT THE FACE!
HUMPFGGSERLL??!!
Ugh.........
Wtf. Its pivot, you get mainly critism, and the odd pat on the back
Nov 5, 2009 2:51 PM #510329
Good Movie. :D but what you should fix is:
When he steps forward, he only goes back with the whole body, what you should do is to make him do this way:
Step forward.
Punch.
Move body forwards.
move body backwards.
Yes I know my instructions suck...
When he steps forward, he only goes back with the whole body, what you should do is to make him do this way:
Step forward.
Punch.
Move body forwards.
move body backwards.
Yes I know my instructions suck...
Nov 5, 2009 2:56 PM #510330
you know what else sucks? posting in 9 month old threads.
Nov 5, 2009 5:04 PM #510348
Quote from Phosphorusyou know what else sucks? posting in 9 month old threads.
I had my flame cannon at the ready :[
Nov 6, 2009 5:14 PM #510770
this is the first animation I've seen of you and I expected it would be better than it was. But I expect your better at flash though.
Nov 6, 2009 6:40 PM #510784
Everybody Shut up , Look at the date.
Now stop spamming and bumping this thread because flood probably doesn't care.
Now stop spamming and bumping this thread because flood probably doesn't care.
Nov 7, 2009 7:40 PM #511116
Quote from ghost12321this is the first animation I've seen of you and I expected it would be better than it was. But I expect your better at flash though.
HOW ABOUT I SHOVE MY FOOT UP YOUR NoSE