Raizen 2 is finished and is on NG

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Feb 19, 2009 8:30 AM #360143
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I disliked it.
Not that animation, there is pretty much no story line whatsoever.

That, and all that was involved in Raizen 2 was him killing the Oh so frightening "Venomancer", and breaking into a door. Not that epic.

I suppose it was good for what it was and the style?
Doesn't deserve front page.


i was going to tell the story in chapter 3. if you saw the comment on NG i wrote
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Feb 20, 2009 4:50 PM #360888
A storyline has to be built as the series goes along. You cannot just have 2 random episodes and THEN a storyline. People will be confused and dislike it more.

You're basically saying, episodes one and two are senseless violence, but you'll get into a story-line in episode 3. I cannot think of anything that has a story-line that has done that.
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Feb 20, 2009 5:19 PM #360912
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A storyline has to be built as the series goes along. You cannot just have 2 random episodes and THEN a storyline. People will be confused and dislike it more.

You're basically saying, episodes one and two are senseless violence, but you'll get into a story-line in episode 3. I cannot think of anything that has a story-line that has done that.


acctually.. it was in part 1.. in part 1 he escapes.. and why was he in the tube. in part 2.. why was he bitten and why did he rampage.. in part 3 hell find out the answers.. i lined it up already.. just chillax and cut me some crap.