i decided that ill just combine chapter 3 and 2 together so that the story would be understood..

anyways heres a sneak peak


http://www.truploader.com/view/638066


C AND C AND C

Great job. The angles you used are very well done.

My one complaint is that, as he is running toward the door, that his body should bounce up and down a bit more instead of staying level. Unless, of course, that was your intention.

Great work no matter what, thou.

Quote from supranova

Great job. The angles you used are very well done.

My one complaint is that, as he is running toward the door, that his body should bounce up and down a bit more instead of staying level. Unless, of course, that was your intention.

Great work no matter what, thou.

thanks ill work on that.. ^^

more C and c

What supernova said, the rest was very good. :D

Very good job, till now, Javarush.
Though, the whole background are so nice clear lines, and 1 colour, then a fb character gets in that is drawn with a sloppy brush, try to fix that. Make your characters like Raizen 2 in the beginning.

Quote from Lixu

Very good job, till now, Javarush.
Though, the whole background are so nice clear lines, and 1 colour, then a fb character gets in that is drawn with a sloppy brush, try to fix that. Make your characters like Raizen 2 in the beginning.

yeah your right, well it's hard for me now, till i get the tab. but thanks a lot.

hey dude that was awesome can't wait to see more btw mentor me in flash

looks awesome <3 its gonna be great man..

Good but the face looked retarded.
Change it.

You're doing really good man, keep it up, nice style and angles.

the only bit i hate, its how you separate the lighter shades from the darker shades with a black line. it shouldnt be like that because psychologically it stops it from looking much like a shadow zone.

apart from that, very nice :P hopefully as inspiring as the last

It was nice but I dont like the running, its un eased and stiff :D personally I'd prefer more fluid movements, but its really good animation, very entertaining, finish it =)

Quote from Mesmay

the only bit i hate, its how you separate the lighter shades from the darker shades with a black line. it shouldnt be like that because psychologically it stops it from looking much like a shadow zone.

apart from that, very nice :P hopefully as inspiring as the last

Quote from Tawnik

It was nice but I dont like the running, its un eased and stiff :D personally I'd prefer more fluid movements, but its really good animation, very entertaining, finish it =)

@mesmay

well its the style of the animation.. anyways your right.. but i dont konw.. because if i make changes now, it will be different from the ones i started already.. ya know what i mean?

@tawnik.. i didnt add much easing like i animate raizen because.. the enemy should be like super fast and shit.

yeah :P
but think how different 1 was from 2.

Quote from Mesmay

yeah :P
but think how different 1 was from 2.

yeah i know what i mean is the style in the whole chapter not the whole series lol..