Your anatomy and colours are a bit off.
But I can feel the comfortableness in the first one.
Try a bit more detail, and care for colours to choose(differences between colours, etc)
thanks for the comment 'Wtf' i like making my style abit cartoony and a way in which i do this is i tend to use colours that aren't realistic, i'll try and make it closer colours next time i do something, thanks.
You might need to work on hands, i'm horrible at them too, so i know how hard it is... especially when they're gripping something or are formed as a fist.