I decided that in order to get as good as Unknown-Person and Zeile on DA, I need to do it as they do: with comics and Original characters....so here is my first character which I will be pitting against Unknown-Person's Karl as a practice comic:

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Name: Evan Vance

Occupation: Street urchin. Has no job, no real life, and no family...

Age: 19

Height: 5'11''

Weight: 140 lbs.

Likes: Parkour, kind people, beautiful days, calm wind...

Dislikes: Alcohol, Cigarettes, the usual...as well as the Ocean and most bodies of water

Abilities: In his normal state, Evan Vance is simply extremely acrobatic, endurant, and swift.

Evan's parents died when he was young. A deranged killer entered their house and slaughtered them mercilessly, preaching that they bore demons.
He killed himself right in front of him and his brother. Soon after, his Brother parted. He drowned while saving Evan from the same fate. Evan left to the streets after these events, with nothing but his Brother's jacket to keep him safe. On a faithful night, Evan met a demon while escaping harassers. The demon slaughtered the harassers as they neared, and stood there. The demon explained that Evan was to be it's host from now till his death. Evan tried to run, but the demon eventually took form in his jacket. Whenever Evan is in a deadly situation, the hood throws itself over him and the demon takes over...
Notes: Evan does not like to fight. He uses jujitsu to escape a fight, but otherwise he will never enter combat to hurt someone else.


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Name: Gabriel

Occupation: Demon; his occupation is as the protector of Evan Vance

Age: ??

Height: normally about 7 foot, but can reach multiple stories in height

Weight: Heavy

Likes: Evan, death, blood, pain

Disklikes: God, church, holy water, rain

Abilities: Other than being nearly impervious, he is also very strong, very fast, and can shapeshift. (ie. can make his arms blades)

Gabriel is a demon. Without anything considered, he is ruthless, evil, and bloodthirsty. But this is all cast aside when he is with Evan. He cherishes Evan. Evan is basically what gives him the will to stay on Earth instead of returning to hell, and would gladly sacrifice himself to protect Evan. Even when he takes over, though, evan is left in the center of Gabriel's body, meaning that all hits directed there will go through and hit Evan's unconscious body. This is a heavy weakness for Gabriel, as he would never let Evan die and would sacrifice himself to defend him.

The first one is well drawn but the head proportions seem off again. Otherwise he looks cool.

The demon lacks detail :/

Do more!

thanks bonk, I am currently redoing the Demon reference sheet, as I really did rush him.

i like how you put those little sketches in the background. and i agree with bonk.

I have original characters too.
But my page views don't seem to rise..

cool, wtf, maybe sometime we can do a comic battle against on of each other's characters? :)

I like the style you use with pencil better but this seems too ..... cartoony. But its cool.