failed entry

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ellwilllanimator

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Mar 29, 2009 5:35 PM #383613

http://www.truploader.com/view/298498
im a begginer so comments are wholy apprectiated.
please tell me how i could improve dont just post:
' eease it bettr' or 'resizing' put a lil detail into it .
thanks.

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Mar 29, 2009 5:54 PM #383640

what was it an entry for?

anyway, the head is too big for the stick, and it did all it's moves way to fast without any definition, which can be improved by easing..

keep trying

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Mar 29, 2009 6:06 PM #383656

i think the entry was for run in wall collab

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Mar 29, 2009 6:16 PM #383678

yeah i think it was probably for the run in wall collab.
Kd is right the head is a little big for the body