A flower (Rab)

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Apr 7, 2009 11:05 AM #390684
I posted here, finally. :P

I made a small drawing, took 30 minutes or so, then just made a small anim out of it.

http://www.truploader.com/view/17542
Right-click, untick the play button, the first frame, you will see the flower. I know it is cartoony and all, but apart from that, good? It is my first actual attempt at trying to draw on flash...

I used a mouse to draw it.

I see it is 2-D (thnks Pf0), but that might add to the carton style?
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Apr 7, 2009 11:55 AM #390699
the flower kinda looked wierd, but it was cool.
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Apr 7, 2009 11:57 AM #390700
Weird but cool, kinda an odd combo, don'tcha think?
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Apr 7, 2009 12:04 PM #390703
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Weird but cool, kinda an odd combo, don'tcha think?

i ment the flower was wierd but the anim was cool
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Apr 7, 2009 12:08 PM #390704
Oh, okay. May I have some CC on why the flower was weird/how to improve?
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Apr 7, 2009 12:36 PM #390708
Study flowers for one. I would also practice doing stuff on paper before you start doing computer stuff, as you get better control and skills with paper.

Also I have to be harsh but that didn't look flowerly in the slightest
Keep practicing though.
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Apr 7, 2009 1:01 PM #390713
It was abstract...Forget to mention that...
Was it good for a first? or a fail?
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Apr 7, 2009 1:30 PM #390721
That does not count as abstract, it was utterly unrealistic.
Fail.
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Apr 7, 2009 2:13 PM #390740
the flowers looked like blue leaves.
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I would also practice doing stuff on paper before you start doing computer stuff, as you get better control and skills with paper.
(i'm using this quote so i don't have to type the whole thing over again.)
@ Rab: improve... but i did like the idea.
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Apr 7, 2009 5:09 PM #390784
Unrealistic. The flower should be smaller.
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Apr 7, 2009 7:16 PM #390849
Meh, a start I guess. Practice moar!
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Apr 8, 2009 4:45 AM #391241
So I fail...At this, I think. I will try and improve.
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Apr 8, 2009 11:41 AM #391353
It looks not so much a flower as a large brown mouth throwing up some blue paint.

Also the outline is WAY too thick.
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Apr 8, 2009 2:51 PM #391448
Note: Cartoon style.
Urm, the flower is actually leaves....My bad on that. :3
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Apr 8, 2009 3:41 PM #391454
Quote from Rabstar
Note: Cartoon style.
Urm, the flower is actually leaves....My bad on that. :3


Cartoons can't be extremely detailed ^^