Disappointin Since 91
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ds4CQo0-dsM
Starin At The Sun
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FCAMyPwavpI

How are y'all doin. Funny how this community just seems to draw people back. I remember when Hunterkiller77 came back for like a month after a forever long time of being gone. Same shit with me. I'm not stayin though, I only come for constructive critisizm. Noone I know would be as honest as someone who i dont really know.

Hey, glad you're back.

Lyrics are tight as usual, but I still hate your voice. Where did the instrumentals come from, by the way? They sound familiar but I can't quite put my finger on it.

Dissapointin' since 91 is saves the day - atmosphere. the instrumental was way too short so i had to chop it and loop it aha. Starin' at the sun is Song Cry - Jayz. Funny thing is i didnt even write the song to that instrumental and it fit perfectly. My favorite two lines were in the perfect spot, and my last line of the chorus ended right at the end of the instrumental.

Ah right, I thought the first one sounded like an Atmosphere song.

My only critique is maybe not be so monotone. Add a little more emphasis and loudness. Don't get me wrong, it works for Guru from Gang Starr, but that because his voice sounds a bit better for it.

This is exilement, it'd about time you came back

It's pretty good, though I suggest you look into making original backing tracks rather than samples. I'd be willing to help you out there if you'd ever like to do it.

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This is exilement, it'd about time you came back

It's pretty good, though I suggest you look into making original backing tracks rather than samples. I'd be willing to help you out there if you'd ever like to do it.

Yeah, I have FL but i suck with it. It's rare that I make a good instrumental with it.

I'm not really back. Like i said, I like getting critisizm on forums because people tend to be more honest and upfront.

Yeah I use FL too, except I don't suck with it

I figured you weren't "back", but.. yeah, either way, if you want original instrumentals I might be able to put something together.

I would also be willing to make you some instrumental tracks, too. I'm supposed to be doing something for Deathwish but now that I finally have time to do it, I'll probably be able to offer my services elsewhere, too.

Your voice just doesn't seem to suit the backing tracks, and it also seems a little loud too.

And you're too right about the drawing people back, far too right.

Quote from Prospect]Yeah I use FL too, except I don't suck with it

I figured you weren't "back", but.. yeah, either way, if you want original instrumentals I might be able to put something together.[/QUOTE]
Man that would rock. I dont know how it'll work out, I deleted everyone from forums off of my MSN. You can PM me your addy and I'll look for it in my blocked contacts.

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I would also be willing to make you some instrumental tracks, too. I'm supposed to be doing something for Deathwish but now that I finally have time to do it, I'll probably be able to offer my services elsewhere, too.

See what I said to Exilement.

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Your voice just doesn't seem to suit the backing tracks, and it also seems a little loud too.

And you're too right about the drawing people back, far too right.

Maybe it has something to do with the volume? but I agree though, my voice isnt really a good one for rap. I just like it, feels good to vent.

Ahaha, well stickpage was a big part of my early teenage life.

Cool .