So, lots of you have been giving me critique for the last 3 days of my line animating life (THANKS SCORPIOXXX!). I decided to try some blood effects (inspired by miccool)

http://www.truploader.com/view/949444

C&C highly appreciated!

[SIZE="1"](CBA TO ADD SOUNDS!)[/SIZE]

Next, now I'm in a particle mood, shall practice some particles!

not really that much there to critique,, i guess you should try not to make the blood stop in mid air,, but i do like the sort of glow you put on it...i might have to try that out.

Thanks zans, all I did was add the color of 50% alpha of the color I used behind the particles.

Thanks for C&C

ive decided to comment but not criticize because you were advertising your animation in the chat thread


thatll learn you

Thats not very nice. D:

Gunshot = Okay, but a bit too just free transform.

Blood = Too blobby

Gun + Enviornment = cool

PS its not nice to shoot people

Gunshot = Okay, but a bit too just free transform.

Blood = Too blobby

Gun + Enviornment = cool

PS its not nice to shoot people

huh, weird double post there.
Anyway, the blood falls a bit too fast and hard. And it all falls at the same time. It also may be a bit too thick.
The fall is a bit too stiff. Maybe make the arms flail out a bit, instead of go right to his sides. And the run is a bit stiff, too.
The fall is also a bit sudden. There isn't much in between the run and the fall, maybe like an "oh no!" stage, if that makes any sense.
But keep workin at it, it's definitely showing improvement

Nothing really happens in the gunshot.
There needs to be more blood when he's shot with that big of a gun.
The gun was good, did you make it yourself?

Quote from BluGil

Gunshot = Okay, but a bit too just free transform.

Blood = Too blobby

Gun + Enviornment = cool

PS its not nice to shoot people

Interesting double post there, but oh well. I was going for a miccool style blood: http://Miccool.deviantart.com/art/Miccool-demo-84234702 which looks quite blobby anyway, but maybe I should use a thinner line for the smaller particles.

Quote from doc

huh, weird double post there.
Anyway, the blood falls a bit too fast and hard. And it all falls at the same time. It also may be a bit too thick.
The fall is a bit too stiff. Maybe make the arms flail out a bit, instead of go right to his sides. And the run is a bit stiff, too.
The fall is also a bit sudden. There isn't much in between the run and the fall, maybe like an "oh no!" stage, if that makes any sense.
But keep workin at it, it's definitely showing improvement

Yea, I was trying a style of run, that didn't really work out in the end lol. But your right about the fall, I couldn't quite get it right, bu yea.

thanks for C&C

Quote from Zyles

Nothing really happens in the gunshot.
There needs to be more blood when he's shot with that big of a gun.
The gun was good, did you make it yourself?

What do you mean "nothing really happens in the gunshot"?

Yes the gun was good. (but was it really made by me...)

i use 84 frame for make this...go to my frofile to play it for FREE name:stick shooter version 1

GET THE **** OUT OF MY VERY OLD THREAD! (caps)

lol, oh well. Still good work.

The fall was bad, very bad.

i like the blood