V-cammie and short fight.

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Apr 22, 2009 3:44 PM #403606
Well,V-cam ain't my strong side...


Enjoyz


http://www.truploader.com/view/112803

For you dizzy ppl :p

http://www.truploader.com/view/581095
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Apr 22, 2009 3:52 PM #403607
It moved side to side too much.

Don't give it such wide movements.
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Apr 22, 2009 3:53 PM #403608
Post the anim but WITHOUT the v-cam.

It looks pretty decent.
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Apr 22, 2009 3:54 PM #403609
V-cam is making me dizzy. Post without it.
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Apr 22, 2009 4:16 PM #403618
made seperate file withoutz V-Cam
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Apr 22, 2009 4:20 PM #403620
Needs more easing an particles.

Lol, particles.
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Apr 22, 2009 5:37 PM #403658
Quote from Zyles
Needs more easing an particles.

Lol, particles.



Yh,I dun kno what happened to them,they just disappeared at upload,But I still put a lot of particles
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Apr 22, 2009 6:06 PM #403670
The kick and the breaking apart form the rock was out of time.

Use the v-cam, but with less exaggerated movements.

Anticipation and force is also needed.
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Apr 22, 2009 6:14 PM #403677
Nice but how did the rock fly off?

btw, how long did it take?
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Apr 22, 2009 6:18 PM #403685
Quote from KD
The kick and the breaking apart form the rock was out of time.

Use the v-cam, but with less exaggerated movements.

Anticipation and force is also needed.



I see what you mean...My anims used to look like this

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/485177
But I guess I got rusties : /
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Apr 22, 2009 6:21 PM #403693
Here again, what I call "animation flow" :
It's how the animation itself, the movements or the scenes continue, its even the Vcam.Basically, if you want to move your Vcam and make your flash more exciting, then you should move it with one part of the body, or you should move it with impacts, with one guy, whatever, just dont make it like this, its confusing and "untidy" looking.

The moral ? Dont move the Vcam randomly, keep things simple.
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Apr 22, 2009 6:31 PM #403710
The kick looked bad, and yeah, the vcam moved a bit too randomly.
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Apr 23, 2009 12:36 AM #403961
the v cam is very twitchy, it's hard to follow what's happening with it. also the attacks seemed to be lacking force, mainly the kick that breaks the ground.
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Apr 23, 2009 1:24 AM #403996
your brushwork is a bit shaky and unclean. also the black guys head is off color
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Apr 23, 2009 2:19 PM #404116
Quote from Potato Guy
Nice but how did the rock fly off?

btw, how long did it take?



Don't know,but it wasn't long anyway XD