Falcon Punch

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May 6, 2009 6:39 PM #413194
FALCON PUNCH :D
http://www.truploader.com/view/248570

I finally fixed my mouse! Now I can FINALLY animate again, without having to re-draw every line 60 times :/.
Couldn't find the sound effect, though :C.
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May 6, 2009 6:57 PM #413210
=)

Its nice but I'd prefer more anticipation before he enters the screen, like tell the audience "watch out, something is coming"
that'd make it more ejoyable
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May 6, 2009 6:58 PM #413211
Yeah I don't like the entrance either. Think I'll re-do it or something :0.
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May 6, 2009 7:24 PM #413223
The effects look great, but there's something about the movement of the punch that doesn't look quite right. idk, maybe its just me.
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May 6, 2009 7:34 PM #413228
Quote from doc
The effects look great, but there's something about the movement of the punch that doesn't look quite right. idk, maybe its just me.


It's his head, it should be more forward, near the right arm..
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May 6, 2009 8:25 PM #413266
ah thats it, the head. Good call tawnik.
The heads are also drawn kind of sloppily
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May 7, 2009 9:09 AM #413613
Man you are SO original.

Animation was good though.
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May 7, 2009 1:51 PM #413721
Oh yes I AM original.
Anyways, gonna make another falconpunch very soon. One which will not fail like this D:.
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May 7, 2009 2:14 PM #413729
Make him power-up a bit more, will make it more dramatic.
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May 7, 2009 3:28 PM #413748
Hmm..

You're jasper? o_O

that style seems familiar. Plus your dutch. You and your sexyness

I like the speed trails. I wanna copy it |:. I like it.
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May 7, 2009 4:45 PM #413777
I just drew some speedlines, but they looked like shit, so I put 100% blur on the X side and it looked pretty awesome :).
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May 7, 2009 5:01 PM #413790
That was quite good.