you need to be in the beginners section for a while.

i know its bad lol

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i didnt mean to copy the other guy that is related to mine that was not my intent...

Very brutal animation...

Ok, go to the beginners section.

Quote from bishop192

i didnt mean to copy the other guy that is related to mine that was not my intent...

1. Don't double post.

2. Make sense with your posts.

Someone probably deleted the post that his text is related too.

I think he might be refering to an animation I saw a few weeks ago that was very similar. An almost identical concept, in fact, although I don't believe he's stolen it.

yea there was one with a stick with a sniper rifle on a box that shot at another

aw guys dont be kinda too harsh on him,

and bishop, read the rules plx

Yes we are harsh cuzz else the pivot section is full of noob animations in no time.

Ok. I'll put some genuine cc in.

The blood wasn't bad. I liked the blood.
There wasn't any easing. If you don't know what that is there's a tutorial somewhere (probably the "pivot tutorials" section).
When you move the gun, have a half way stage. You don't necessarily have to slow it right down, but it just jumped from one place to the other which made it look choppy, plus there was no change in speed (see easing).

That's enough for you to start working on after your first.

i didnt like the blood, it comes after like the guy shoots him 5 seconds later (well not tht much but, still it comes too late)

other than that, the gun recoil was fine, and have u tried the walking and running?

I think the way the blood looked was good, and I think there's only a frame or two in it. It would be hard to show both the rifle and the guy getting hit, so I think he got the balance right. There is, however, some blood on the wall before he gets hit and that's not good.

ye thats wat im tryin to say